English Advanced Module A Essay Plans

[owidjaja]

Hey guys,
So I have an Advanced English exam next Monday and we were given two essay questions in advance and one of these questions will be the question on the day (essentially, we're preparing for two essays -_-). Would it be possible for you guys to take a look at my essay plans and give feedback?

Thanks in advance

[angewina_naguen]

Hey guys,
So I have an Advanced English exam next Monday and we were given two essay questions in advance and one of these questions will be the question on the day (essentially, we're preparing for two essays -_-). Would it be possible for you guys to take a look at my essay plans and give feedback?

Thanks in advance

Hey, owidjaja!

I love the ideas you have in your essays! Your plan looks all good to me! My only suggestions might be paraphrasing the quotes with elipses so you don't have to write out the full quote in the exam and use that time elsewhere, as well as practising writing both of them under exam conditions at least once each so you can see what works and what can be improved on to make everything as efficient for you as possible! That's my stance on preparing for assessments like this but if anyone else has any suggestions, I'd love to hear them too! Good luck for it 

Angelina