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werdna

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[English] Oral presentation
« on: April 03, 2011, 02:22:16 pm »
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EDIT: I've attached an edited version onto this post.
« Last Edit: November 03, 2011, 10:57:22 pm by werdna »
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Re: [English] Oral presentation and powerpoint on IVF sex selection
« Reply #1 on: April 03, 2011, 02:25:22 pm »
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Impressive.

How long would that 2100 words be at your pace of speech?
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Re: [English] Oral presentation and powerpoint on IVF sex selection
« Reply #2 on: April 03, 2011, 02:28:45 pm »
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Quote from: ATAR on April 03, 2011, 02:25:22 pm
Impressive.

How long would that 2100 words be at your pace of speech?

Not too sure yet.. I'd take a guess at 8 minutes.
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Re: [English] Oral presentation and powerpoint on IVF sex selection
« Reply #3 on: April 03, 2011, 03:32:36 pm »
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I'll say it's a very fluent and engaging speech. Just wondering, is that your preffered style of persuasion?

It would have been good to have photos of babies in your PowerPoint and at the end a personal view along the lines of...'I know I wouldn't pick the gender of my child'

But then again, I like emotional appeal...even if it's a little
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Re: [English] Oral presentation and powerpoint on IVF sex selection
« Reply #4 on: April 03, 2011, 03:40:32 pm »
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Quote from: azngirl456 on April 03, 2011, 03:32:36 pm
I'll say it's a very fluent and engaging speech. Just wondering, is that your preffered style of persuasion?

It would have been good to have photos of babies in your PowerPoint and at the end a personal view along the lines of...'I know I wouldn't pick the gender of my child'

But then again, I like emotional appeal...even if it's a little
Quote from: azngirl456 on April 03, 2011, 03:32:36 pm
I'll say it's a very fluent and engaging speech. Just wondering, is that your preffered style of persuasion?

It would have been good to have photos of babies in your PowerPoint and at the end a personal view along the lines of...'I know I wouldn't pick the gender of my child'

But then again, I like emotional appeal...even if it's a little

Agreed, emotional appeal is fantastic! One of the stronger techniques IMO.
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Re: [English] Oral presentation and powerpoint on IVF sex selection
« Reply #5 on: April 03, 2011, 04:24:41 pm »
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OK this is an edited version of the oral, it has been cut down by 500 words.  ???
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Re: [English] Oral presentation and powerpoint on IVF sex selection
« Reply #6 on: April 03, 2011, 08:14:46 pm »
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Interesting... is the Dr. scenario a personal choice or something other kids at your school are doing? I haven't seen anyone else take that approach, it should be refreshing if noone else in the class is doing it. Fluent, conversational and persuasive... I like it.
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Re: [English] Oral presentation and powerpoint on IVF sex selection
« Reply #7 on: April 03, 2011, 08:29:32 pm »
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Quote from: funkyducky on April 03, 2011, 08:14:46 pm
Interesting... is the Dr. scenario a personal choice or something other kids at your school are doing? I haven't seen anyone else take that approach, it should be refreshing if noone else in the class is doing it. Fluent, conversational and persuasive... I like it.

I'm the only one taking a persona/scenario.. did the same thing for my 3&4 oral last year on smacking kids, and it worked so yeah I'm doing it again. :P Thanks funkyducky!
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Re: [English] Oral presentation and powerpoint on IVF sex selection
« Reply #8 on: April 09, 2011, 02:18:32 pm »
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Thanks for all the help and advice guys, this earned me a 19/20! :D
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Re: [English] Oral presentation and powerpoint on IVF sex selection
« Reply #9 on: April 09, 2011, 02:20:26 pm »
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Quote from: werdna on April 09, 2011, 02:18:32 pm
Thanks for all the help and advice guys, this earned me a 19/20! :D
What happened to the other 1? :P
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