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ashs_vb

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Poem too simple/stupid/childish for uni?
« on: March 29, 2014, 08:46:37 pm »
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Just a poem i wrote for an assessment, no topic required, can get inspiration from anything. Wondering if i could get an opinion on wether its too mundae or simple.


Could those that can help pm me please. Cheers
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Re: Poem too simple/stupid/childish for uni?
« Reply #1 on: March 29, 2014, 08:49:12 pm »
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Hey,

I dont think it is childish or stupid but i cannot comment on how well written it is because i have no clue about poetry lol.

Also, if this is an assessment piece, i would avoid posting it online in any place as it may come back to bite you.
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Re: Poem too simple/stupid/childish for uni?
« Reply #2 on: March 29, 2014, 10:26:37 pm »
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Yes.

Definitely do not post it online. If they find it online, they might think you copied it.
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