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Ali Khan

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Essay for No Sugar
« on: October 21, 2016, 02:37:13 pm »
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Hi Luaran.
Attached are my essays on "No Sugar" and "A Seperation". Could you please go through them and give me some feedback?
Thanks a lot.
Ali Khan
« Last Edit: October 21, 2016, 02:59:39 pm by Ali Khan »

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Re: Essay for No Sugar
« Reply #1 on: October 21, 2016, 03:02:16 pm »
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I've moved this to English Work & Submissions on the assumption you'll upload/post your essays (since there's nothing there at the moment). Cheers.
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Re: Essay for No Sugar
« Reply #2 on: October 21, 2016, 03:19:58 pm »
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You need to either upload your essay document as an attachment or copy and paste your essay into your post. I have attached two pictures to this post that will help you find the attachments section of a post.
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Re: Essay for No Sugar
« Reply #3 on: October 21, 2016, 04:10:16 pm »
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Thanks a lot.
Is there any way that only she (Luaran) can read my essays ? Apparently its Public and everyone can see it .

Use the forum's Personal Messaging system:
Step 1: Find Lauren's Profile.
Step 2: Go to Action --> Send Personal Message.
Step 3: Post your essay in the allocated box. Like with the forums, you can use BB Code.
Step 4: Click "send Message"

Bear in mind that admin does see these PMs but it is not publicly available. 

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Re: Essay for No Sugar
« Reply #4 on: October 21, 2016, 04:41:32 pm »
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Thanks a lot FallingStar. Truly appreciated :)