Legal Studies

[Maxoscarcleversley]

Hey everyone, I'm not sure if there is any legal studies markers or even past students but can someone please have a look at the essays. Any feedback would be amazing. My teacher has been incredibly vague and I'm not confident about them. It would be awesome if anyone at all can give me some feedback. I will also upload the marking guidelines for each of these essays. They are the 2013 Family Question 28a, 2014 Crime Question (Without the quote because of copyright) and the World Order 2014 31a question. PLEASE PLEASE HELP ME. I have written these under time conditions in an open book setting with cases, legislation, instrument, media articles and information by hand and then have typed the essays up word for word. I really do need some help and I don't have another legal studies teachers email and I can't hand these in easily because I live very far out of town.
I am posting the 2013 marking guidelines here as I cant post everything. Any feedback again would be amazing. I'm just a bit lost at the moment

21-25
Demonstrates extensive knowledge of contemporary family law issues
• Makes an informed judgement (explicitly or implicitly) as to the
effectiveness of law reform in dealing with contemporary issues
concerning family members
• Integrates relevant examples such as legislation, cases, media,
international instruments and documents
• Presents a sustained, logical and cohesive answer to the question using
relevant legal terminology and concepts
16-20
• Demonstrates sound knowledge of contemporary family law issues
• Makes a sound judgement (explicitly or implicitly) as to the effectiveness
of law reform in dealing with contemporary issues concerning family
members
• Uses relevant examples such as legislation, cases, media, international
instruments and documents
• Presents a logical and cohesive answer to the question using relevant legal
terminology and concepts
11-15
• Demonstrates some knowledge of contemporary family law issue/s
• Makes some judgement (explicitly or implicitly) as to the effectiveness of
law reform in dealing with contemporary issues concerning family
members
• Makes some reference to examples such as legislation, cases, media,
international instruments and documents
• Presents a structured answer using relevant legal terminology and
concepts
6-10
• Demonstrates limited knowledge of contemporary family law issue/s
• Makes general statements regarding the effectiveness of law reform in
dealing with contemporary issues concerning family members
• Makes limited reference to examples such as legislation, cases, media,
international instruments and documents
• Uses some relevant legal terminology
1-5
• Writes in general terms about issues concerning family members
• May include reference to legislation, cases, media, international
instruments and documents
• May refer to general legal terms

[Potatohater]

I'm pretty sure there are legal studies markers and people on here, there seems to be a decent community, I'm just not one of them so I don't know for certain. Maybe you could try going on the legal studies board and asking on there maybe more legal people will see it?