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Albeno69

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year of wonders examples
« on: October 06, 2010, 08:18:49 pm »
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now i know this is a new text and there is not much on it and therefore i wanted to start a thread with examples if you have an example post it and with it how much it got out of 10.
it will be much help to see a variety of writing styles.
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Re: year of wonders examples
« Reply #1 on: October 06, 2010, 08:28:58 pm »
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Erm, i'm not doing this text for the exam but, here's a piece i wrote at the start of the year :s (timed 1 hr)

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The women in ‘Year of Wonders’ are more resourceful and resilient than the men.  Do you agree?

In Year of Wonders, by Geraldine Brooks, the women in the novel, mainly being Anna and Elinor, take full advantage of their wellbeing at the time of the plague and become resourceful creatures that are willing to help out their town when in need. The women also remain flexible and cope with the plague while unfortunately the male gender fails in their lack-lustre attempt to help out the community.

The women in Eyam experiencing the plague in 1666 use their abilities to benefit the health of the community, and understand to keep the townspeople “above the ground” they must take action, while the men take a back seat through the plague and hope for the best. Instances like these are demonstrated a number of times through the two central women in the novel, Elinor and Anna, such as when they use herbal medicine resources in attempt to fight the effects of the plague to help the townspeople.  Although at first Anna only came to the Gowdies for herself, “I came here not seeking herbs to help others. Only myself”, her admiration for Elinor and her willingness to learn causes her to cascade into the depths of finding a way to help others. Both Elinor and Annas ingenuity of thinking about helping the whole community to become stronger only reassures the audience of their dependability and kindness in such times when others need help. “The key to defeating this Plague...must lie here, in the virtue of such plants”. This quote shows that Elinor truly understands the meaning of the plague, while others around her continue to think that it is caused by Gods sin or a religious meaning. While Anna and Elinor as women better the community by using the valuable herbs and resources to help others, the men in Year Of Wonders aren’t shown in the same positive light, an example of this being Anna’s father Josiah Bondt. When referring to her father while visiting the tavern, Anna says, “It appeared that he had been at the pot for some time”. Descriptions of Josiah throughout the novel, including this one make it apparent that he isn’t interested in helping the community, only himself and his wellbeing. Even when Josiah does help by digging graves at the end of the novel, ultimately it is to benefit himself, not the townspeople. Thus, in these cases women are more resourceful than men during the plague and are actually willing to help out the community.

To further prove that women are overall more capable than men during the plague, these women show a large amount of resilience, remaining flexible, surviving and coping, while many men find it harder to deal with the plague that has been inflicted on them. Both Anna and Elinor, the central characters in the novel, show that they are capable of dealing with such stress and hardship during such a difficult time. Without Elinor however, audiences are somewhat lead to believe that Anna would have had a hard time coping with the plague, as the loved ones around her are disappearing rapidly. Saying this, we can conclude that Elinor is the major reason that Anna finds the strength to go on after the tragedies that occur in her life. Both Elinor and Anna as a team combat many tasks that may seem unthinkable to others in the town of Eyam, examples being using herbal medicine and treating the sick, Elinor encouraging Anna to midwife women who need help, helping Mary Wickford and the mines and Anna alone adopting Mrs Bradfords son. Without their ability to move forward in life, past the plague and events, Anna and Elinor simply wouldn’t be able to help others or have the motivation to do so. “I would help this child, Elinor, not bury her!” Anna could have easily shut herself off from the outside world but alas continues to strive in her hopes to survive and help others. On the other hand, some men during this time clearly find it more difficult to cope with the plague inflicted upon them. Michael Mompellion for example, found it harder to deal with the plague, constantly withdrawing himself from others around him and being alone in his room. It is obvious here that he finds the pressure from the church combined with the towns disease too much, and therefore his source of depression shows somewhat a lack of being flexible and resilient. Therefore, these cases show that the women in Eyam have an ability to move forward from the plague, while the men struggle in finding motives to do so. 

However, it somewhat unfair to put a generalisation on men in the novel Year of Wonders, as throughout the novel some men have also shown they are capable of surviving through the plague while other women show through their actions they are incompetent and lack skill to persevere. A leading character, Michael Mompellion for example shows that he can demonstrate leader qualities that unite people in the town of Eyam and provide them with some hope. Mompellion also possesses the trait of resilience by driving himself to exhaustion, promising to the town that ‘none should die alone’.  “Looking at Mr Mompellion, i worried that he,too, might drop. He looked warn to a nub. It seemed he had not slept the previous night” This shows that Michael too is capable of keeping promises, providing graves for people that needed them for their family. Although Michael spends some time dwelling in the misery of the town, his actions this time show that he’s able to help the community and therefore to an extent move forward from the plague. In the meantime, women, such as Aphra, show a clear lack of resilience and resourcefulness, such as when she pretends to be a ghost of Anys Gowdie, and charging money for spells. Aphra shows that this act of crime was to benefit her only, and although she may have been creative with pretending to act as the dead, the selfishness of her actions could not be justified.   Therefore, Michael who is indeed a male figure, is able to portray characteristics that allow him to be resilient and resourceful through the plague, while some women are clearly incapable of doing so.
 
In conclusion, it is obvious from actions alone that the women in the novel Year of Wonders are more capable of conducting such tasks and remaining resilient throughout, while the men show a clear lack of understanding for what is going on around them. Anna and Elinor especially are two characters that illustrate these two admirable traits to the best of their advantage, bettering not only themselves but sufferers around them.

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Re: year of wonders examples
« Reply #2 on: October 06, 2010, 08:32:48 pm »
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Oh, i also found the first essay I did for YOW (lol)...it's not good...at all

The attitudes and sensibility of the character Anna Frith are too modern which diminishes her credibility of the role she plays in the story. Do you agree?

In the novel ‘Year of Wonders’, written by Geraldine Brooks, the protagonist Anna Frith displays much courage and determination in the midst of the horrible plague in her town of Eyam in the year 1666.  Her transformation throughout the novel demonstrates how much someone can grow in such a short amount of time. Coming from a era where women didn’t necessarily dominate society and let men take control, it could be seen that Anna Friths character in ‘Year of Wonders’ is unrealistic, however, her inner strength throughout the novel never seems forced or preposterous, or at that, too contemporary.

Throughout the book we empathize for Anna for her misfortunes, and are able to see the miraculous transformation of character that takes place, from a shy servant who is unaware of the effect she can have on people to an evolving woman that is finally aware of her strength and power. With each emotionally charged death of those around her, such as her almost lover George Vicars and the deaths of her three boisterous boys, we as an audience are able to somewhat connect with Anna in terms of losing a loved one. “Good yield does not come without suffering, it does not come without struggle, and toil, and yes, loss”. Due to the fact that Anna lost her husband from disease, she realized she must carry on and help those around her, especially, when she was unaffected by the plague, and still remained healthy. Simply, this attribute of Annas personality in striving to persist doesn’t seem too modern for the times of 1666, the difference between her and other characters in the novel being that she doesn’t shut herself off from the outside world, but knows she has to help others and through this desire to learn and to be of service to others she seeks to educate herself with the help of the Rectors wife Elinor and learns to read and take in the understanding of the medicinal use of herbs to help the afflicted. By researching and collecting herbs, this hobby takes her mind off the dwelling and reminiscing of old times with her family.

In defense of the reliability and realness of Anna Frith, she was able to feel and respond emotionally to each and every death as much as she could without getting too involved and dwelling in the sadness of the town. Although the character Anna must have suffered, she seemed to be running on autopilot most of the time because she knew that there was something that had to be done every day in order to keep the remaining citizens alive. This can be viewed as either an inherent trait in her nature or perhaps born out of a desire to be something better than her upbringing which revolved around a drunken father, who also paired up with a drunken woman which hardly seems fitting to enable a child to feel safe and secure. Playing healer and counselor to plague victims and birthing women alike, she calls upon a strength she never knew she had to face. Now as this may come across as unrealistic, a woman fighting for her town, it doesn’t necessarily make her lose credibility as a character. The fact that Anna was healthy and not suffering from the disease made it clear that she must do something to help others. Does that mean she loses her reliability as a character simply because she’s doing the right thing for everyone? 

Coming from an era where women didn’t have an important role in society and were deemed to live a life of subservience and childbearing, Anna Frith had the spirit to advance and rise above her level as a subservient woman in Eyam. This aspect of her definitely isn’t unrealistic, at a time women were known as the ‘lesser strengths’, the men were known as the ‘providers’ and for whatever reasons, being those given above, she broke from that bond and became a much more complex woman than those around her. Anna didn’t even necessarily have a desire to be ‘strong’ or ‘better’, it was more something that she had to achieve in order to help everyone out. In this way, she could seem to be ahead of her times, but while reading the novel Anna as a character never seems out of place or way too modern.

Life’s adversity is also another contributor as to why Anna’s character maybe too modern in society. The reason why Anna may have seemed ‘ahead of her times’ was due to the fact that she had different social upbringings than others and understood how to take charge of her own life and not let others run it for her. Her dad drinking may have had a profound effect on her, determined to be “better” than her upbringing forming her into a woman that stood up for herself, such as when Michael Mompellion confessed his sins of never touching her beloved friend and guider Elinor because of her mistakes in the past. Anna had enough courage to leave immediately. “I slid away from under his hand and rolled off the pallet…my only thought was to get away”. Anna wouldn’t back down when the town thought Mem Gowdie was a witch and subsequently drowned her because of it, she did as much as she could to try and save those who were innocent.  In the end, inner strength was a core part of Annas nature and without this characteristic she wouldn’t have been able to survive.   

Although it may be seen in some aspects that Annas role is diminished by the fact that she’s ‘too modern’ for her times, this is simply a case of a woman standing up for herself and striving for her town while others didn’t have enough strength, both physically and mentally. Her power and authority in the role as the central character isn’t diminished at all, as Anna was able to feel and respond to other characters like everyone else in the book. Not once in the story does the audience feel like Annas character is too modern, or seemingly unrealistic in terms of other characters. Anna embodies the powerful woman that she has become during the plague, and in the end learns how much strength she has within herself.


sigh...i actually liked year of wonders. it's annoying we had to study it at the start of the year and not the end. i am SO curious as to what the essay question in the exams going to be...if it's easy i'm going to shoot myself in the foot for not doing it.

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Re: year of wonders examples
« Reply #3 on: October 06, 2010, 09:41:07 pm »
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sigh...i actually liked year of wonders. it's annoying we had to study it at the start of the year and not the end. i am SO curious as to what the essay question in the exams going to be...if it's easy i'm going to shoot myself in the foot for not doing it.


Then why aren't you doing it? there is only just a few that they can actually ask for the first year..
it's true, we did it at the start of the year..i wish we did it in the second semester :(

Note: nice essay, reading the first one, i spotted out few minor mistakes. Not really wanting to critique your essay

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Ancient Persian Proverb; " I Wept because i had no Shoes, until i saw a man with no feet!"

First they came for the Socialists, and I did not speak out --
Because I was not a Socialist.
Then they came for the Trade Unionists, and I did not speak out --
Because I was not a Trade Unionist.
Then they came for the Jews, and I did not speak out --
Because I was not a Jew.
Then they came for me -- and there was no one left to speak for me.
-Martin Niemoller, a german pastor

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Re: year of wonders examples
« Reply #4 on: October 06, 2010, 09:53:14 pm »
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hen why aren't you doing it? there is only just a few that they can actually ask for the first year..
it's true, we did it at the start of the year..i wish we did it in the second semester

Note: nice essay, reading the first one, i spotted out few minor mistakes. Not really wanting to critique your essay

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Because 1984 is fresh in my mind, it has better quotes and it's easier to write essays on.  LOL please don't feel the need to critique my essay. They're just ones i do in class, here and there. Nothing serious.