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Nothing need to be deleted
« on: September 08, 2012, 09:17:08 pm »
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Thanks for the help people :)
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Re: English language essay-Need help with my grammar
« Reply #1 on: September 08, 2012, 09:27:46 pm »
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I've edited the first paragraph and first half of second...
why havent you started off with an intro? it makes doing ur essay so much easier.

 “Your use of language sends out lots of little message not just about your level of education and where you come from, but how you would like to be perceived.”

Haven't done any intro yet

The use of language could tell what level of educational or their ethical background they communicators belong too. Furthermore, ones accent people accents can be identified through language, and hence a unique identity. which falls under the systems of phonology and phonetics. Accents refer to Vocal prominence or emphasis given to a particular syllable, word, or phrase. Also, accent refers to a particular way of pronouncing phonemes, for example, you might find a number of English speakers who all share the same grammar and vocabulary. But they will pronounce different words with different accents such as speakers of Scottish,  Cockney or BBC pronunciation (BBC accent as is a model for foreign learners wishing to acquire an English accent). The word accent in this sense is distinguished from dialect, which usually refers to a variety of a language that differs from other varieties in grammar and/or vocabulary. dialect is geographical - mention that rather than saying they are different from grammar and or vocab.Accent plays a big role of how people perceived each other .For examples, Iimmigrants or a person who was born from migrants parents will be acknowledged as FOB aka fresh of boat. They will be discriminated as people who doesn’t don't speak the language English very well and be criticised due to the  heavily strong accents. For example, an Indian accent are is well known for being a strong their heavily accent. That this is highly unpopular and is always being mocked by people. Due to their cheap labour jobs like taxi drivers, 7/11, telemarketing, people begins to have Ethnocentrism making false assumptions about them based on our own experience and have negative perception. 

Phonology and phonetics is are not the only thing we use to determine or perceive language. Under the subsystems of semantics, it identifies the level of education we belong to and how certain words are used in certain context. Highly educated people will only understand and learn highly complex words and complicated language. For example, couple of words from Mr Kevin Rudd “due seasons, other fish to fry, Working families, No Magic Bullet, embrace the future, make ends meet “.Would leave lower education people is scratching their head. Whereas Lower education would use simple English language “people who work “rather than “working family”. Language not only tells the difference in education but it could be redefined as a dominant tool. For example people can manipulate others by giving true or false information that will make them act in the way you want: A sentence like "a car cash just happened outside" will make people leave a room to see the crash. Also it can either work to your advantage or it can result in negative effects.  Without being aware of what is current and appropriate language, a person may unintentionally offend a person or convey a message that they did not intend. For example if you say “That English language teacher is gay “,in front of your teacher  he will  lecture you .While you said it in front of  your grandpa  or older people they will intends to think it  happy.
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Re: English language essay-Need help with my grammar
« Reply #2 on: September 08, 2012, 10:12:38 pm »
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I'll add my thoughts too


The use of language could tell is able to tell what educational or ethical background they interlocutors belong too. In addition, a person's accent is a phonological feature that is assists in conveying their unique identity, for example it may identify the locality in which the speaker resides, their ethnicity and whether the language spoken is their native language. Accents refer to Vocal prominence or emphasis given to a particular syllable, word, or phrase and it also refers to a particular way of pronouncing. Although one might find a number of English speakers sharing the same grammar and vocabulary, they may differ in how they pronounce words as a result of their different accents such as Scots or Cockney or BBC pronunciation (BBC accent as a model for foreign learners wishing to acquire an English accent). The word accent in this sense is distinguished from dialect, which usually refers to a variety of a language that differs from other varieties in grammar and/or vocabulary. Accent plays a big role of how people perceive each other .For example non native english speakers who have migrated to an english- speaking country or whose parents are migrants migrants are often acknowledged as FOB, i.e. 'fresh of boat'. Such individuals may be discriminated and possibly stereotyped as people who do not speak English to the native standard as a result of their heavy accents. For example, Indian accents are almost entirely different to that of english in terms of its phonology, such as the supra-segmental features which are often transferred from one's native language to English (there is a name for this but I forget what it's called, anyone know?). Problems can often arise as a result of the syllable- timed Indian language, which distinguishes itself from the stress-timed nature of the English language, in addition the stress is associated with a low pitch whereas in most English dialects, stressed syllables are generally pronounced with a higher pitch. That is highly unpopular and always being mock by people. Due to their cheap labour jobs like taxi, 7/11, telemarketing, people begins to have Ethnocentrism making false assumptions about them based on our own experience and have negative perception. No I wouldn't add this, sort of irrelevant.

Phonology and phonetics what characterizes Australian Englush. The field semantics  identifies the level of education to which we belong and how certain words are used in particular contexts. For example, using highly complex words or complicated language can sometimes form the impression that a person is highly educated. For example, some notable phrases from Kevin Rudd's speech include “due seasons', 'other fish to fry', 'working families' and 'No Magic Bullet'. This may 'Would leave lower education people is scratching their hea. In contrast, other speakers with a comparably lower education may use a simle semantic structure for example replacing 'working family' with 'people who work'. Language is not only able to tell us about our perceived differences in education but it also acts as a dominant tool. For example people can manipulate others by giving true or false information that can result in a sort of power relationship to make a listener act in a certain way.  A sentence like "a car cash just happened outside" may make people leave a room to see the crash. Such It can also work to your advantage or it can result in negative effects.  Also, without being aware of what is current and appropriate language, a person may unintentionally offend a person or convey a message that was unintended. For example if you one says “That English language teacher is gay “,in front of your a teacher,   he will  lecture you this may result in a strain in the relationship between teacher and student., Whilst you if it was said it in front of  your ones grandpa or older people they will intends to think it  happy.


A couple of points: Just some grammatical errors like 'example' as opposed to 'for example'
                              * Replace 'you' as in 'your grandpa' to the impersonal 'one's grandpa'. Second person singular/ plural is a no-no in most cases,
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Re: English language essay-Need help with my grammar
« Reply #3 on: September 08, 2012, 10:17:25 pm »
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For example, Indian accents are almost entirely different to that of english in terms of its phonology, such as the supra-segmental features which are often transferred from one's native language to English (there is a name for this but I forget what it's called, anyone know?).

loan words ? / borrowings
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Re: English language essay-Need help with my grammar
« Reply #4 on: September 08, 2012, 10:37:46 pm »
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For example, Indian accents are almost entirely different to that of english in terms of its phonology, such as the supra-segmental features which are often transferred from one's native language to English (there is a name for this but I forget what it's called, anyone know?).

loan words ? / borrowings

Oh I remember now- ethnolect!
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Re: English language essay-Need help with my grammar
« Reply #5 on: September 08, 2012, 11:01:28 pm »
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ooh  rofl. i thought you meant something else :p
yup, 'indian ethnolect' would be nice!
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