Just had a timed English practice SAC after school on Stasiland. I now know that I can be very comfortable with ideas but have trouble expressing them in writing

My teacher is encouraging us to move away from TEEL which I was excited for because we do this in Literature, but I think it's sort of different to how and what I expected it to be like. Oh well, I'm home now and I'm glad it's over. I always sort of feel like this with first practice SACs for English, and then I do a couple more and I improve a lot

Only problem is my SAC's on Tuesday, so I'll only be able to get my teacher's feedback on one more piece before the SAC. Anyone up for giving me some feedback over the weekend then?