Hi cindy!
do you have any tips on writing essays? or how you put your ideas into a paragraph? i feel like when im writing its all over the place!
Hi! From what I remember, my Chinese school teacher in year 11 (if you or anyone go to Balwyn, not sure if she's still there but 付老师?) told me, when brainstorming ideas for your essays, think of 3 KEY aspects you're going to talk about, maybe write it down somewhere. Give these aspects a topic sentence, and then build on your topic sentences with 2 or 3 more ideas.
The key part to making your essay really beast is to add in idioms, but add then in subtly and not abruptly, that /really/ scores you the highest marks, and is the hardest part imo too!
I tried to write an example for you but I can't think of a really good one from the top of my head :S Maybe give me a message sometime and I'll try to think up a good one in the mean time?