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« Reply #90 on: October 22, 2014, 11:21:13 pm »
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Hi guys,

‘It is the gothic elements of ghosts and time-shifts that give suspense to what is otherwise only a simple tale.’ Do you agree?

For the above question, I'm having difficulty in writing a paragraph concerning the ghosts and the gothic elements of the tale, can anyone give me a hand?

• Marley's Ghost - his 'ponderous chain' girded from 'cash boxes' and 'heavy purses wrought in steel'. Through this spectre, and the gothic element of the supernatural about the spectre, the repercussions of a life of avarice is amplified.
• The ominous and anonymous Ghost of Christmas Yet to Come. He has an enigma about him, and his abstinence from talking really intensifies the gothic raiment about him. This is intended to not only instil his protagonist with fear, but incorporate an enthralling element into the backbone of his morality tale.
• Dickens reinstates the powers of the spirits through demonstrating their abilities to create temporal inconsistencies.

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Re: A Christmas Carol by Charles Dickens Thread
« Reply #91 on: October 23, 2014, 12:22:57 am »
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• Marley's Ghost - his 'ponderous chain' girded from 'cash boxes' and 'heavy purses wrought in steel'. Through this spectre, and the gothic element of the supernatural about the spectre, the repercussions of a life of avarice is amplified.
• The ominous and anonymous Ghost of Christmas Yet to Come. He has an enigma about him, and his abstinence from talking really intensifies the gothic raiment about him. This is intended to not only instil his protagonist with fear, but incorporate an enthralling element into the backbone of his morality tale.
• Dickens reinstates the powers of the spirits through demonstrating their abilities to create temporal inconsistencies.

Thanks Yacoubb!! Helped a lot! ;D

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« Reply #92 on: October 23, 2014, 03:38:42 pm »
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Hello again.

Can anyone help me with these two questions?

Compare and Contrast the three ghosts to consider which one is most effective in bringing about Scrooge's change of heart.

'Despite the name of the novella, A Christmas Carol is about charity no matter the season.' Do you agree?


EDIT: And also, what can be said of the time shifts in A Christmas Carol besides the enthralling aspect of it?
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Re: A Christmas Carol by Charles Dickens Thread
« Reply #93 on: October 24, 2014, 09:38:50 pm »
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Need ideas and paragpraph structures for these prompts
"A Christmas Carol is an entertaining novel which also unsettles the reader." Discuss.
"By the end of ACC, Scrooge is a changed man. How is his redemption achieved."
"Scrooge suffers more from ignorance than from selfishness." Discuss.


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« Reply #94 on: October 24, 2014, 10:53:07 pm »
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Need ideas and paragpraph structures for these prompts
"A Christmas Carol is an entertaining novel which also unsettles the reader." Discuss.
"By the end of ACC, Scrooge is a changed man. How is his redemption achieved."
"Scrooge suffers more from ignorance than from selfishness." Discuss.

"A Christmas Carol is an entertaining novel which also unsettles the reader." Discuss.
In this question, you need to attend to it being an entertaining novella, as well as the elements of the novella that are unsettling. The enthralling elements (e.g. supernatural beings, gothic settings, temporal inconsistencies) as well as the sinister messages that Dickens conveys to the readership, are the unsettling elements you should attend to.

Body Paragraph One: Entertaining
- The actual title - reinstating musical qualities of the novella (light-hearted nature) through associating story with a carol
- Christmas setting
- Scrooge's comical character

Body Paragraph Two: Enthralling Elements
- Scrooge's transformation is mediated by supernatural beings
- Spirits are capable of creating temporal inconsistencies (enunciates the power of the supernatural that is intended to unsettle the reader).

Body Paragraph Three:
- Through the redoubtable Scrooge, Dickens reinstates that failing to mend his avaricious ways in life will condemn him to an afterlife of an 'incessant torture of remorse'.
- Dickens insinuates that a lifetime of being engrossed by the 'master passion, Gain' as opposed to human relations and 'affectionate grouping' will result in an individual's death being rejoiced, and their lasting memory will only be negative (discuss this in relation to Scrooge).

Body Paragraph Four:
- Dickens indicates that the negligence of the Victorian elite has contributed to the appalling living conditions of the 'half-naked' poor of the slums (discuss the children of men, Ignorance and Want, and also the looters, and how these are allegorical figures of the Victorian under-class that has been stripped of their human qualities by the elite).
- Dickens proposes that by failing to nurture the poor, the poor will take from the wealthy all they were deprived on when they become 'bereft, unwatched, uncared' corposes following their death (discuss in relation to the looters, and how they profit from Scrooge's death through the theft of objects as trivial as an 'old fashioned silver teaspoon'.

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"By the end of A Christmas Carol, Scrooge is a changed man". How is his redemption achieved?
Key word in that question - how. This means that we need to discuss Dickens' conscious decisions in the structure of the narrative, that enable Scrooge to achieve a successful and enduring redemption.

I would tackle the following points:
- Dickens mirrors his narrative structure on the tri-temporal process of healing that he indicates is essential for Scrooge's reclamation. The consummation comes down to the single quote: 'I will live in the Past, the Present and the Future'.

BODY PARAGRAPH ONE:
- Dickens indicates that first, Scrooge must accept that he is at fault and that he is need of redemption so as to avoid the 'incessant torture of remorse' that his former companion Jacob Marley currently suffers.

BODY PARAGRAPH TWO:
- The author insinuates that delving into the past is an integral element of redemption. Through venturing into 'the Past', Scrooge recognises the happiness and love that he has repressed as a result of being engrossed by the 'master passion, Gain', as well as to work out the origins of his present condition.

BODY PARAGRAPH THREE:
- Having acknowledged that his bitter pursuit of wealth has cost him the 'joy, the gratitude and the ecstacy' that he witnesses in the lives of those around him EXCEPT his, Scrooge must now witness the communal theme of 'affectionate grouping'. I would somewhere in this paragraph mention that he must witness this after his heart has softened to visions of his childhood, which as a reader we know makes his 'cold eye glisten' and his 'heart [leap]'.

BODY PARAGRAPH FOUR:
- Now, Scrooge is at a position where he realises the essence of changing. Dickens indicates that after being guided by the previous spirits, Scrooge must now articulate his own failings to conclude the final chapter of this redemptive strategy. He must also witness the repercussions of his ignorance on himself and others, and his admission 'I am not the man I was' underscores the success of this.

Make sure with this essay you continuously refer to Dickens - tbh, just writing this plan was almost like constructing a plan for language analysis lol.

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Re: A Christmas Carol by Charles Dickens Thread
« Reply #95 on: October 24, 2014, 11:01:01 pm »
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Thanks sooo much yacoubb!!!! legend is an understatement  ;D ;D 8)

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« Reply #96 on: October 24, 2014, 11:03:42 pm »
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Thanks sooo much yacoubb!!!! legend is an understatement  ;D ;D 8)

Haha no worries :)

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Re: A Christmas Carol by Charles Dickens Thread
« Reply #97 on: October 26, 2014, 08:19:48 am »
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Does anyone here have a general prediction of what this year prompt will be about  ::)? ACC is in its last year now so hopefully the prompt wont be so hard. I think VCAA haven't focused on minor character and Dickens' construction yet.
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« Reply #98 on: October 26, 2014, 08:32:27 am »
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Does anyone here have a general prediction of what this year prompt will be about  ::)? ACC is in its last year now so hopefully the prompt wont be so hard. I think VCAA haven't focused on minor character and Dickens' construction yet.

Yeah I think they may look at HOW Dickens shows Scrooge's redemption, so the construction of his redemption. Something else they haven't really delved into is the role of the supernatural beings in A Christmas Carol, and their roles in Scrooge's redemption.

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Re: A Christmas Carol by Charles Dickens Thread
« Reply #99 on: October 26, 2014, 11:18:02 am »
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Although VCAA exams are easily accessible (duh), I made a Word document of all the past ACC VCAA prompts which might be helpful to you guys :)

I'm hoping for a prompt about redemption!
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Re: A Christmas Carol by Charles Dickens Thread
« Reply #100 on: October 26, 2014, 03:43:25 pm »
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"How does A Christmas Carol show the importance of family to an individuals happiness"
Cratchits - not wealthy but are happy
Scrooge - worldly ignorance, no family spirit - miserly
what else?

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"Why show me this, if I am past all hope?"
'It is fear for his future, rather than genuine remorse or generosity of spirit, that causes Scrooge to change.' Do you agree?
The quote in the prompt, im not sure how you would talk about it - does it show that he only wants to change if it is still possible that he can redeem himself? suggesting that he only cares about self preservation
I believe he changes from genuine remorse or generosity of spirit
arguments: experiences his own emotions during journey of redemption
when he returns, his actions resemble a man who has truly changed from the heart, "his own heart laughed," and "glowing with his good intentions" etc...
i need a third paragraph, im not sure?

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« Reply #101 on: October 26, 2014, 05:34:56 pm »
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How would you characterise the genre of A Christmas Carol?

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Never seen a text response question like that, how would one answer such??

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« Reply #102 on: October 26, 2014, 09:14:45 pm »
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How would you characterise the genre of A Christmas Carol?

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Never seen a text response question like that, how would one answer such??

Gothic fiction.
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Re: A Christmas Carol by Charles Dickens Thread
« Reply #103 on: October 26, 2014, 09:53:05 pm »
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Also
"Why show me this, if I am past all hope?"
'It is fear for his future, rather than genuine remorse or generosity of spirit, that causes Scrooge to change.' Do you agree?
The quote in the prompt, im not sure how you would talk about it - does it show that he only wants to change if it is still possible that he can redeem himself? suggesting that he only cares about self preservation
I believe he changes from genuine remorse or generosity of spirit
arguments: experiences his own emotions during journey of redemption
when he returns, his actions resemble a man who has truly changed from the heart, "his own heart laughed," and "glowing with his good intentions" etc...
i need a third paragraph, im not sure?

I would also challenge the prompt and talk about the fear that he felt:
- when he found out that his body would be "unwanted and uncared for" after death, he realized that a transformation was vital
- after he saw his own tombstone, he said that "I will honour Christmas in my heart" portraying that the change occurred immediately after experiencing this fate
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« Reply #104 on: October 26, 2014, 10:01:43 pm »
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How would you characterise the genre of A Christmas Carol?

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Never seen a text response question like that, how would one answer such??

Essentially, A Christmas Carol is a morality tale. However, there are elements of the text which make it a gothic fiction, elements that make it a Christmas about story, elements that make it an allegory. How I would structure that essay:

* Gothic fiction
- Supernatural beings
- Temporal inconsistencies

* Story about Christmas/Entertaining

* Educational morality tale