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TimewaveZero

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Could someone possibly give quick feedback on an essay?
« on: August 26, 2014, 09:18:35 pm »
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Sorry if this is in the wrong section, but I was just wondering if there would be anyone here with a high competency in English and would be oh so kind to be willing to give a quick feedback on an essay for me? I'll love you forever, and that's a lot coming from me... <3

It is a Context: Encountering Conflict essay in the form of an article for a magazine. Life of Galileo was the supporting text.

(Essay attached, it doesn't have a conclusion, I couldn't think of how to finish it. It also doesn't include any quotes, as we just started this text)
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Re: Could someone possibly give quick feedback on an essay?
« Reply #1 on: August 26, 2014, 11:27:26 pm »
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Hey,
I don't think I am so competent in English as you would have preferred but I considered reading over your essay and providing any useful help.
I've attached your essay with some advice...Hope it's helpful.
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