Free Original Practice Exams - 2015

[aussie.hamilton]

Dear Lauren
If you have the time i would greatly appreciate it if you could mark some of my essays.
I have a few attached, and i obviously do not expect you to do them all but if you could even just peruse over them and give some feed back that would be great. Thankyou

[duo0024]

Here's my essay for the language analysis piece 'All Litter Bugs are Trash!' Took me 55 minutes (WOO FINALLY UNDER 1 HOUR!!!)
Please be as critical as possible
Cheers
P.S. I fucking loved reading Max Lawson's comment. Kudos to the person who wrote that. I never thought someone could be so cynical...
P.P.S The juggling act was real.

[drmockingbird]

Hey Lauren,

Here's a response to the L.A on Exam 4 "Bubble Wrapped". Took me around 60 minutes

[cameotodd]

Hey Lauren,
Could you have a look at this essay on 'In the Country of Men'. It's on the second topic from the 4th exam.

Thank you

(Anyone is welcome to mark it, would really appreciate feedback)

Bump

[Nought]

Hi Lauren,

Thanks for writing the practice exams. I have attempted a text response for No Sugar from exam 4 (exam conditions). I would be really grateful if you could give me some feedback.

[heids]

Feedback for Splash-Tackle-Flail and duo0024

Hope it makes sense, let me know if it doesn't... and hope it's helpful don't let me know if it isn't

Re multiple visuals, Splash - do them both as a rule of thumb, but Lauren was a bit nasty here with two visuals AND three comments, which makes it a bit tricky to fit it all in with decent depth of analysis in one hour.

[codyhollis]

Hey Lauren, was wondering if you could give me some feedback on my 'Whose Reality?' essay
Please be as critical as possible!!!
Thankyou

[scottg15]

Hello Lauren,

Here is SECTION B of your 3rd 2015 exam.

If you could have a look at it and give some detailed feedback and a score out of 10, it will be much appreciated.

Thanks in advance (any1 can give feedback. The more the merrier)

GOOD LUCK EVERY1 FOR WEDNESDAY.

[Splash-Tackle-Flail]

Feedback for Splash-Tackle-Flail and duo0024

Hope it makes sense, let me know if it doesn't... and hope it's helpful don't let me know if it isn't

Re multiple visuals, Splash - do them both as a rule of thumb, but Lauren was a bit nasty here with two visuals AND three comments, which makes it a bit tricky to fit it all in with decent depth of analysis in one hour.

Thank you so so so so very much, there's more feedback than what I've written!! But yeah agreed that all the things were a bit nasty

[heids]

there's more feedback than what I've written!!

... Whoops.

Feedback for aussie.hamilton (2014 VCAA LA) attached

[heids]

Feedback for drmockingbird's LA attached

This is the last feedback I can give before the exam, hope it helps!

[literally lauren]

I never thought someone could be so cynical...
P.P.S The juggling act was real.

Lauren was a bit nasty here with two visuals AND three comments, which makes it a bit tricky to fit it all in with decent depth of analysis in one hour.

all the things were a bit nasty

Ya'll love me deep down - I know it.

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Feedback for aussie.hamilton, cametodd, and Nought attached
Will get to the others shortly

[literally lauren]

Mooooore essays

The prac. exams were really well handled overall this year, guys. Well done!

[cameotodd]

Hi Lauren!
I just want to say thank you so much for marking the ITCOM practice piece for me! I know you stated that I should start quoting earlier into my BPs, any advice on how to go from the topic sentence and then start providing evidence and making it seem smooth and fluent?

Also, context is probably my weakest area in English and I was wondering if you could have a quick look at this piece and provide some general feedback (Just a quick look, no need to mark it extensively like you did for the other one)

Thank you so much again Lauren

[literally lauren]

Feedback for this and your essay from the other thread, cameotodd