Hey I'm new to this site so I'm not sure if i'm posting correctly nonetheless I'm in dying need of help.
My teacher assigned us 4 essays to complete by the end of the holidays and with one week to go I've yet to complete one. Just looking for points/arguments for the following questions.
-Evaluate the effectiveness of sentencing and punishment as a means of achieving justice.
-Assess the effectiveness of the criminal justice system when dealing with young offenders.
-To what extent does criminal law balance the rights of victims, offenders and society?
Any legislation and cases would be helpful but otherwise thank you in advance 
Hi jimmyjay!
Welcome to the forums!
So in order to tackle these questions I'd look over the syllabus dot points for each question. I'll list out how I'd answer each question below;
Evaluate the effectiveness of sentencing and punishment as a means of achieving justice.When looking at effectiveness: note down the pros and cons of each dot point in the chapter.
Dot points in this chapter;
Statutory/judicial guidelines - can be controversial because of mandatory sentencing (look at cases regarding one punch killings and the killing of police officers)
Purposes of Punishment - briefly discuss the reasons for punishment and when evaluating its effectiveness look at cases such as R v AEM and McCartney v R. Discuss issues with punishing one person more severely than others as it may be seen as an injustice if it fails to achieve its only purpose and the difficulty in determining who will reoffend and who will not.
Factors affecting a sentencing decision - this dot point is about aggravating and mitigating factors - I would touch on it briefly and talk about how it is effective in looking at individual circumstances when deciding a sentence
Role of the victim - this part of sentencing is controversial as court may hand down different punishments for the same crime based on how the victim was affected. Cases include R v Tuala and R v Thomas
Appeals - I would briefly touch on how these ensure justice is served as they occur when there is a miscarriage of justice or an error in law
Types of penalties - not necessary to go into for this question
Alternative methods of sentencing - circle sentencing has been seen as effective but can be improved. effectiveness of restorative justice is unknown
Post-sentencing considerations - I would touch on all of them but go in depth with preventative and continued detention as its controversial.
Remember to evaluate effectiveness throughout your entire essay, I would recommend doing it at the beginning and end of each body paragraph for each dot point and then in the conclusion for an overall effectiveness. Also, you must go through the good AND the bad, not one or the other.
Assess the effectiveness of the criminal justice system when dealing with young offenders.This question is very similar to the one above however, on young offenders. I have a small table on the overall effectiveness of the legal system dealing with young offenders, but of course ensure you evaluate each dot point.
Factors which help ensure overall effectiveness; - Age of criminal responsibility recognises children do not have the mental capacity to truly form criminal intent
- Children are given greater protection under the law when questioned or arrested
- Children’s court proceedings designed to protect children, whilst holding them accountable
- Separate detention centres protect them from negative impact of hardened adult criminals
- Sentencing alternatives divert young offenders from court
Factors which limit overall effectiveness - Some argue the age of criminal responsibility is too high
- Some see sentencing alternatives as soft options
Within this essay I would discuss the age of criminal responsibility. the rights of children when being questioned/arrested, penalties for children and alternatives to court. Again, ensure you assess effectiveness throughout your entire essay, not just at the end of each paragraph.
To what extent does criminal law balance the rights of victims, offenders and society?This question relates to the entire crime part of the syllabus, and VOS is a theme and challenge. When answering this question I recommend going through each chapter and making VOS tables for each applicable dot point. See how each chapter would affect the victim, offenders and society in each situation and see how the law attempts to balance these rights. Think of concepts like the rule of law and the presumption of innocence.
Feel free to PM me if you need any help or post your essays in the marking and feedback area of the forums

Hope this helped!
meerae