Discovery is a multifaceted process providing
new? different? altered? renewed? I think an adjective might work well here! insight for individuals and society. The progression of individuals to new worlds shapes the experiential processes of discovery, allowing for renewed perceptions of previously held beliefs. O’Mahoney’s Go Back To Where You Came From (Go Back), a TV documentary series aired in 2011, explores the transformative nature of physical experiences in providing insights into the human condition. Geoff Parr’s, 1985 The National Picture critiques the disjunctive relationship of colonisation in challenging the human condition. The displacement of individuals to new plains becomes a catalyst to expose the underlying truth and implications of abrogating power. Through a developed understanding of the impacts of personal, physical and social discoveries, the audience is forced to question the human condition and impacts of discovery in understanding individual experience.
I love this introduction! You should be super stoked with this. I really think that this essay is great for adapting as well. So when you get into an exam and see the question, there is a lot that you can do with this introduction.Through the first-hand experience of discovery, changes in perceptions and new understandings of the world emerge. Initially, a form of instability in the human condition restricted the connection with the plight of others
in Go Back....
Oops, we haven't introduced the text we are talking about yet. I know you're talking about Go Back because I analysed the same technique, but we have to state the text The mis-en-scene of books juxtaposed with a close up camera shot of Darren, reflects his high intellect, connoting his lack of empathy to create a sense of power over refugees. This lack of compassion contrasts with
another participant,Glenny, who upholds humanitarian beliefs all along, reinforced by the eye-level camera angle to reveal equality through the veneration of asylums and refugees
When is the eye-level camera used? Is it in an indirect interview? In a written text, you don't have to always state where the quote comes from. But with a film, eye-level camera can be used anywhere. So it's good to clarify. Excellent analysis though - eye to eye!. By being forced to go through a physical process of revelation, they come out as transformed individuals
with after discovering insightful understandings of the world. The forceful placement of individuals into foreign homes triggers an emotional response to empathise with “the other”. The centrality of Darren as being the main focus, corresponding with bright lighting is symbolic to a positive change within the participant through the progression of discovery. The characterisation of Darren in particular, gives an insight into the renewal of perceptions accompanied by the process of discovery.
You've used a lot of techniques here which is so good to see. You've done a really really good job here. Discovery of power and accepted perspectives leads to new understandings of the world.
The "accepted perspectives" in this part of the thesis is a bit unclear to me. Someone has discovered accepted perspectives? Try re-organise this sentence a bit or choose different wording, I'm not quite following what you intend for the thesis The National Picture evaluates the role of power in the formation of new and renewed perceptions. By using modern technologies to reconstruct Duterrau’s original painting, The Conciliation, the viewer becomes aware of the intertextuality and transformation of the “new” resonating with the “old”, causing reflections upon the changing values and attitudes of society. The Eurocentric values are encapsulated in the powerful foregrounding of the white coloniser in contrast with the timid and fragile indigenous
people. Indigenous is an adjective, not a noun., revealing the impacts of physical discovery in diminishing the sense of identity. Through the use of chiaroscuro
lighting in the timid representation of the indigenous
people, Parr reiterates the tenuous link to the sovereignty of their land and culture, symbolically depicting them as silent watchers without a voice.
Really great analysis. The appropriation of The Conciliation allows for viewers to comprehend how power can be influential to the process of discovery and the impacts of colonial inquest on individuals.
Displacement of individuals can make the process of discovery confronting and exasperating. Go Back expresses the provocative and confrontational aspect of dislocation for characters, challenged by the process of discovery. The adversity of displacement is illustrated through medium camera shots of Raquel and Raye surrounded by Africans in the background. The voiceover by the narrator reveals how characters will travel to places of an alternate social construct. The mid shot of character facial expressions and gestures depicts feelings of distress, further enhancing the ways in which physical dislocation can result in introspection. The foregrounding of Raquel juxtaposed with the loosely constructed background of the underprivileged location reiterates her discomfort, symbolising the weak nature of the human condition that restricts them from empathising with people. Despite the challenges of discovery, it has the power to provoke reflections enabling an optimistic impact upon creating new values. The character of Raye is used as a vehicle to explore the transformative process, her empathetic acknowledgement of “African people” parallels the audiences questioning of contextual values. The juxtaposition of Raye’s vulnerability with slow, expressive music foreshadows her redemptive process. The lack of background imagery further enhances her realisation, adding emphasis to her new understandings. The deconstruction of barriers between individuals proves that discovery can encourage reconciliation as a renewal for the human condition.
I am seriously so impressed! Awesome stuff here.The physical dislocation of individuals to new worlds can be transformative to impose negative ramifications. Unlike O’Mahoney, Parr’s The National Picture forces the audience to question notions of colonisation and their impacts on Indigenous people. The displacement of the Indigenous
peopledue to European invasions is presented through the use of ghost figures in shades of grey connoting the ambiguity of the indigenous existence. The use of the corrugated iron fence is a metaphorical barrier between the modern group and original inhabitants of the land implying the disparaging nature of colonisation. Parr comments on the lack of individuality of the Indigenous through the foregrounding of racial reversal, displaying their attempt at survival by changing to accept white culture and values. Through the appropriation of Duterrau’s ‘The Conciliation’, it is clear that displacement of individuals can be confronting and provocative, further questioning contextual ideologies of the benefits of colonisation.
For some, discoveries can be fresh and meaningful. Participants in Go Back were initially blinded and egocentric, stopping them from seeing the goodness in humanity. Adam begins as a self-centred individual,
claiming to not
be in agreement with spending “millions of dollars on housing criminals.”
The parts I've added in bold - I think this just adds a bit more clarity to the fact that you are quoting Adam. This exposed through the close up camera shot emphasises on the weak human condition as it fails to accept people of lower socioeconomic status. Through his experiential process, Adam is forced to question his existing perceptions, leading to his maturation
which is symbolic to the renewal of the human condition.
Back in Malaysia while working with the Chins, Adam’s questioning of the situation is shown through his centrality in the foreground corresponding with the setting in the middle ground, displaying how the realisation of truth can be beneficial to the human nature. The close up camera shot of Adam’s facial expressions corresponding with chiaroscuro lighting assists in showing how new worlds can lead to the truth, challenging original values to allow for a retribution of societal constructs. The truth is challenged in the revelatory process becoming a trigger in accepting and appreciating differences of individuals and making it a platform for reconciliation.
The forceful assimilation of different cultures facilitates the understanding of the underlying truth. Similar to Go Back, Parr’s The national picture represents the effects of discovery in diminishing previously held beliefs. The neckerchief worn by the Indigenous man is a paradoxical juxtaposition exposing the forceful assimilation of indigenous people, the colours symbolic to the aboriginal culture expressed in the scarf is ironically wrapped in a European style. The appropriation of this picture uses satire and parody of the overlay of the Indigenous portrait to represent meaning and illustrate the changes within society. Through this forceful representation, the artist comments on the lack of individuality and the negative ramifications of colonisation in restricting human ability and thought, thus questioning the traditional ideas of imperialism to reveal the underlying truth.
The impact of discoveries can be far-reaching and transformative for the individual and the broader society. The notion of superiority and power become
s a barrier in experiencing the ultimate truth creating a need for displacement to evoke empathy. Through the use of visual and film techniques, O’Mahoney and Parr explore the complexity of the human condition, and in doing so, comment on the powerful impetus of discovery in renewing previously held beliefs to expose the truth.
Just to make this conclusion slightly longer, I'd deal with each of the texts in their own sentence instead of just one.