Hey there!
I am doing Robert Gray's poems (which I enjoy) as my prescribed text, and my related text is Seamus Heaney's 'Personal Helicon' (which I love even more). I used Seamus Heaney in my trial and got 14/15 for it, however my teachers are suggesting to me that perhaps it's not the best idea to use a related text that is a poem also, because then your related text has no difference in form to your prescribed text. They argue that using a text that is not a poem would demonstrate a wider range of analysis skills, rather than simply using another poem.
It's a great text that I don't want to abandon and I can analysis it really well, but I guess my teachers are just trying to push me, and when it comes to my essay being marked against thousands of other students, I suppose showing a wide range of skills is importance to distinguish yourself.
What are your thoughts?
Hi...
I definitely think there is some truth in your teacher's opinion.
But just wanted to clarify, there is nothing inherently wrong with comparing two texts of the same type. With related texts, its how you analyse and compare it to your prescribed that is the most important. And by the sounds of it, you have already nailed that bit!
But at the same time, two of the same text type can sometimes limit your opportunities to excel, by not having enough to contrast between the texts. Particularly since discovery is a conceptual unit, it is helpful to compare the portrayal of a range of discoveries in a variety of texts, to show the markers that you really get the rubric. Because, of course, the portrayal of discovery will depend on the techniques the composer uses, which will inherently differ by text type. If the nature of the discoveries in Gray's poetry vs Heaney's is quite different, then it might still work in your favour.
I would definitely encourage you to consider different text types. Perhaps Heaney's poem could be used as a second related text, seeing as it has already worked well for you. Or even use a quote from Heaney's poem in the introduction as a broad quote about discovery. Of course, as it is drawing close to the HSC, its up to you whether you want to change your related text, because it will mean you will have to put that extra bit of effort in to make sure you are confident with using it. So its definitely not essential that you change it, but if you have the time, maybe consider it then.
Hope this helps.