I had an economics essay and I got the mark back and wasn't too happy with it even tho I did a lot of study and preparation and worked really hard on it. Essays have always been my weak point in economics. I was wondering if anyone had any advice about how to improve my essay writing in economics. Because I am really struggling and considering dropping the subject if I can't improve
From my experience (I think I'm pretty good at short answers/MC where it is about knowledge but not amazing at essay, got 17/20 in case study) you need to do 3 things: Answer the question, show connection to theory and use relevant statistics and make reference to trends rather than just dropping stats. Also, if worse comes to worst and you only get 2 16s or something in HSC, you can still quite easily get a 90 raw (tends to align ~95 exam) since MC and SA can be prepared for very accurately, if you study hard. Also, if you want to do well make sure you get essays reviewed BEFORE you write them as that can be the difference between a B6 and a B5, there are excellent resources here and I'm sure in your school/even your friends. I'm not going to lie, economics is not going to be one of those subjects that you can just walk in and sit the exam after reading your notes. You have to have elaborate knowledge of many things that are occurring in the world of economics around you. I recommend even making a book of notes and every week or so reading the finance section of a newspaper/watch the news and write notes on what is happening in the world.
Answering the questionThis is usually what draws people down in essays in pretty much all subjects, if you want a B6 you HAVE to answer the q. Even if you have a 20/20 essay, if it is focused on the wrong thing, you will lose the criterion for being concise.
e.g Discuss the advantages of free trade and the role of international organisations and free trade agreements in promoting trade in the global economy.
From Isaac's compilation of q. Firstly, you have to look at the verb. Discuss which means provide reasons for and against. So when you plan, first you to have an intro and conclusion then think about what points for and against the adv free trade and the effect of international organisations in PROMOTING TRADE in the global economy will have. E.g Free trade allows goods and services to be bought for a cheaper price as foreign countries can produce goods more cheaply due to comparative adv. Although this is the case, it can also cause dumping which can ruin domestic competition in a nations markets. You must ALSO talk about the effect of free trade agreements (make sure to use examples like the EU, NAFTA and bilaterals like ANZCERTA). Although they provide a lot more trade for nations inside the agreement such as in the EU in which labour and goods and services are moved very freely, it also means that many nations are forced to apply tariffs against nations not in the agreement which are majorly developing nations and LDCs, and therefore lock them out of the global economy and trade. You must also do this for organisations such as WTO, IMF etc. Ie, The WTO has allowed for major increases in international trade growth as they have removed a lot of protectionist policies in the Uruguay round (if possible mention some). However, they have poor enforcement on their standards and have allowed countries to use dumping as an excuse for protectionist policies. Then you must have a conclusion. Make sure you don't ramble on unnecessary stuff and have a structure detailed in the intro i.e pros/cons of free trade then agreements then organisations.
show connection to theoryThis is usually required in the criterion "uses appropriate economic terms" or smth. The key here is to take something that has occurred in real life and explain how it works using what you have learnt in the course. e.g use things like graphs of demand and supply, use terms like comparative advantage, CAD, ToT, use equations like C+I+G=Y etc. The example above is relatively easy here as free trade can easily be related to effects on economic growth etc.
use relevant statistics and make reference to trends rather than just dropping statsStatistics are like the quotes of economics. If you don't have evidence then what does it matter what you say. Like quotes in economics, you can't just drop the quote and move on. You must do two things: reference a trend and explain the impact of the statistic. Firstly, quotes are no good on its own. What is the point in saying Australia's GDP is $1.34 trillion in 2015. Saying this has literally no meaning at all. Is this high or low? What is it compared to the rest of the world? In order to use the stat it could be better to compare it to 1980 then 2000. In 1980 it was close to $200 b and it 2000 it was close to $400 b. Although this doesn't take into account economic occurrences such as the GFC, it plants a much better way of explaining what is happening. To add to this, you can't just say a quote like "Australia's GDP was $1.34 t in 2015 compared to 200b in 1980". Instead, you have to talk about the effects of this and why this happened. You could relate it to increased globalisation and the removal of protectionist policies or changes in exports from Japan to the industrious and higher population China who have purchased "UGE" quantities of our exports. You should also reference the impact of increased GDP, are the people benefitting, is the government using wealth efficiently to improve economic development?
Hope this helps you improve, one mark isn't going to end you especially if you take it the right way and endeavour to improve