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English Questions - Help
« on: July 23, 2017, 07:26:12 pm »
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Hi.

I've got several questions on some comprehension texts and would appreciate if you guys could tell me where I went wrong.

Text 1: The Eagle

1) Consider Poem 1
Of the following, the eagle in the poem is best described as
a) Unnatural
b) A force of nature
c) At peace with nature
d) A destroyer of nature

The answer is A. I got B. How would you interpret it as unnatural? It's more depicted as a force of nature in my perspective.

2) The depiction in poem 1 is of an eagle that is more
a) tame than the eagles in poem 2
b) regal than the eagles in poem 2
c) natural than the eagles in poem 2
d) friendly than the eagles in poem 2

The answer is A. I got B since the eagle is more regal in my opinion (the way they say "like a thunderbolt he falls") rather than tame.

Text 2

"The following passage is from the diaries of Australian writer Miles Franklin and was written
in 1935. Franklin has just been to a screening of a contemporary Australian film,
Heritage,which leads her to comment on the Australian film industry of the time.

It is good to observe the improvement in mechanical technique — the cloud effects are beautiful. There were not long teams of bullocks available in those days. In the '40s there were only two drays in the whole of the Southern District and four or six bullocks were a lot. I never saw a tilted dray such as those employed here and of course the bullocks sprint along like a rodeo. In real life the beasts would have been raving mad and dead under such
treatment.

Every advance is welcome — the only way to do things is to do them, and Australian film makers are advancing in mechanics. The whole unique field still lies awaiting the master — the man of vision as well as technical knowledge. But he will have to study the subtleties of Australian life and scenery. Failure, or at best mediocrity, will continue to attend those who strive to jazz Australia up to USA rhythm."


Question 1) Franklin suggests that the Australian film industry of the time needs
a) greater public support
b) more substantial funding
c) a leader of wisdom and foresight
d) to adapt some of the better American practices

Answer is B. How would you interpret that from the text? Nowhere does it mention anything about funding.

2) The structure of the diary entry is
a) detailed account of a film, then criticism of that film
b) commentary on a particular film, then general comment on the film industry
c) introductory comments about the film industry, then personal impressions of a film
d) general commentary on the film industry using examples from various contemporary films

The answer is C. I got B, I don't get how it's C since they talk about the film in the first paragraph.

3) Franklin's view appears to be that the best feature of the film Heritage was the
a) Soundtrack
b) speed of the bullocks
c) technical innovations
d) way that the dray was tilted

The answer is B. I got C since they talk about the "mechanical improvements" and such.

Text 4:

"The following passage is from a short story about a landowner named Anna Akimovna set in
Russia in the nineteenth century. It is Christmas Eve. Here was a thick roll of notes. It came from the bailiff' at the forest villa; he wrote that
he was sending fifteen hundred roubles, which he had been awarded as damages, having won an appeal. Anna Akimovna disliked and feared such words as 'awarded damages' and 'won the suit'. She knew that it was impossible to do without the law, but for some reason, whenever Nazaritch, the manager of the factory, or the bailiff of her villa in the country, both of whom frequently went to law, used to win lawsuits of some sort for her benefit, she always felt uneasy and, as it were, ashamed. On this occasion, too, she felt uneasy and awkward, and wanted to put that fifteen hundred roubles further away that it might be out of her sight.

She thought with vexation that other girls of her age —she was in her twenty-sixth year— were now busy looking after their households, were weary and would sleep sound, and would wake up tomorrow morning in holiday mood; many of them had long been married and had children. Only she, for some reason, was compelled to sit like an old woman over these letters, to make notes upon them, to write answers, then to do nothing the whole evening till midnight, but wait till she was sleepy; and tomorrow they would all day longbe coming with Christmas greetings and asking for favours ... After the holidays Nazaritchwould turn off some twenty of the workpeople for absence from work, and all of the twenty would hang about at the front door, without their caps on, and she would be ashamed to go out to them, and they would be driven away like dogs. And all her acquaintances would say behind her back, and write to her in anonymous letters, that she was a millionaire and exploiter — that she was devouring other men's lives and sucking the blood of the workers.

bailiff:
the person who manages Anna's country property"


Q1) Anna imagines that, when her factory workers are punished for not coming to work, she would
a) watch on with indifference
b) treat them with compassion
c) blame Nazaritch, not herself
d) see their misery and do nothing

The answer is A. How?

Q2) The passage suggests that Anna's factory manager and the villa bailiff are
a) not concerned with impressing Anna
b) inconsistent in their dealings with their employees
c) more sensitive to their employees than Anna
d) very business-like in carrying out their jobs

The answer is C. I put it as D but was confused. How is it C when in the text it's said that the people are driven away like dogs. Doesn't look too sensitive in the owner's perspective, yet it's C?
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Re: English Questions - Help
« Reply #1 on: July 24, 2017, 05:09:02 pm »
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Hey Anonymous!

because this is a lengthy thing to mark in detail because of the reading required, I'm going to add it to the queue of things we need to mark when users reach 25 posts. So I'm doing some creative writing marking at the moment, but by the time that queue has been filed through, hopefully you can post another 4 times around the forums and I can get to this for you!

I hope you understand - we'll be as quick as possible  :)
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« Reply #2 on: July 24, 2017, 06:40:19 pm »
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Oh alright, thank you.

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« Reply #3 on: July 28, 2017, 06:30:04 pm »
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Hey Anonymous!

because this is a lengthy thing to mark in detail because of the reading required, I'm going to add it to the queue of things we need to mark when users reach 25 posts. So I'm doing some creative writing marking at the moment, but by the time that queue has been filed through, hopefully you can post another 4 times around the forums and I can get to this for you!

I hope you understand - we'll be as quick as possible  :)

Hey there again. Just wondering, have you caught up to answering questions from the texts yet? If not, how long do you think it'll take?

Thanks again for your help.

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« Reply #4 on: July 29, 2017, 02:00:17 am »
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Hey there again. Just wondering, have you caught up to answering questions from the texts yet? If not, how long do you think it'll take?

Thanks again for your help.

Hey! I'll let Elyse contradict me if she needs to, but I'm going to make the 'evil-Admin' call here and say we probably aren't going to have time to get you feedback on this, at least not for the next two weeks or so. It's not because we don't want to help, because of course we do! It's just that with Year 12 Trials on at the moment, we really need to be prioritising our time to them (while making sure we don't fall behind at university as well).

Any other time of the year, we'd happily mark it for you - But right now I think we'll probably have to, unfortunately, say it won't be possible. Obviously we want to help everyone, but taking an hour to help a Year 10 student with their comprehension, versus taking an hour to answer questions for Year 12 students about to sit probably the hardest set of exams they'll sit all year that are worth a big chunk of their marks - We just have to prioritise the latter. I know it sounds harsh and I do feel mean, we can just only do so much. Hope you understand, best of luck with it! :)

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« Reply #5 on: July 29, 2017, 11:12:27 am »
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Hey! I'll let Elyse contradict me if she needs to, but I'm going to make the 'evil-Admin' call here and say we probably aren't going to have time to get you feedback on this, at least not for the next two weeks or so. It's not because we don't want to help, because of course we do! It's just that with Year 12 Trials on at the moment, we really need to be prioritising our time to them (while making sure we don't fall behind at university as well).

Any other time of the year, we'd happily mark it for you - But right now I think we'll probably have to, unfortunately, say it won't be possible. Obviously we want to help everyone, but taking an hour to help a Year 10 student with their comprehension, versus taking an hour to answer questions for Year 12 students about to sit probably the hardest set of exams they'll sit all year that are worth a big chunk of their marks - We just have to prioritise the latter. I know it sounds harsh and I do feel mean, we can just only do so much. Hope you understand, best of luck with it! :)
I understand completely. Is it alright if I ask this on the 10th of August or somewhere around that time? Or will trials still be on?

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« Reply #6 on: July 29, 2017, 12:14:34 pm »
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I understand completely. Is it alright if I ask this on the 10th of August or somewhere around that time? Or will trials still be on?

The bulk of our marking should be done by then, so that should be fine Anonymous :)
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« Reply #7 on: August 09, 2017, 08:52:49 pm »
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The bulk of our marking should be done by then, so that should be fine Anonymous :)

Hi there again. Have you guys finished the marking for HSC trials? I've heard that the Trials are over now. If so, could you please mark the questions I have set above please?

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« Reply #8 on: August 10, 2017, 10:23:52 pm »
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« Reply #9 on: August 12, 2017, 01:58:09 am »
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1) Consider Poem 1
Of the following, the eagle in the poem is best described as
a) Unnatural
b) A force of nature
c) At peace with nature
d) A destroyer of nature

The answer is A. I got B. How would you interpret it as unnatural? It's more depicted as a force of nature in my perspective.


So I think this (like lots of comprehension) is very subjective, but the fact that the natural features are described as being around the Eagle, this could imply that the Eagle itself is unnatural? They are very distinctly described - But I definitely see your point also.

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2) The depiction in poem 1 is of an eagle that is more
a) tame than the eagles in poem 2
b) regal than the eagles in poem 2
c) natural than the eagles in poem 2
d) friendly than the eagles in poem 2

The answer is A. I got B since the eagle is more regal in my opinion (the way they say "like a thunderbolt he falls") rather than tame.

I think your interpretation is again, valid. However, the answer is likely referring to the fact that the eagle in Poem 1 is mostly standing still and observing its surroundings. The eagles in Poem 2 are more active. Thus, Eagle 1 is more tame.

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Question 1) Franklin suggests that the Australian film industry of the time needs
a) greater public support
b) more substantial funding
c) a leader of wisdom and foresight
d) to adapt some of the better American practices
Answer is B. How would you interpret that from the text? Nowhere does it mention anything about funding.

I agree, I don't agree with the answer of B.

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2) The structure of the diary entry is
a) detailed account of a film, then criticism of that film
b) commentary on a particular film, then general comment on the film industry
c) introductory comments about the film industry, then personal impressions of a film
d) general commentary on the film industry using examples from various contemporary films
The answer is C. I got B, I don't get how it's C since they talk about the film in the first paragraph.

I also agree with your answer here, the second paragraph is definitely not personal impressions.

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3) Franklin's view appears to be that the best feature of the film Heritage was the
a) Soundtrack
b) speed of the bullocks
c) technical innovations
d) way that the dray was tilted

The answer is B. I got C since they talk about the "mechanical improvements" and such.

I think B is more appropriate, the writer spends most of the first paragraph discussing the bullocks. See the phrase, I never saw a tilted dray such as those employed here and of course the bullocks sprint along like a rodeo, that's the bit I'm reading to answer with B.

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Q1) Anna imagines that, when her factory workers are punished for not coming to work, she would
a) watch on with indifference
b) treat them with compassion
c) blame Nazaritch, not herself
d) see their misery and do nothing
The answer is A. How?


Slightly deceptive, I think D is more appropriate. She definitely does nothing, so it is either A or D. I disagree with A, the language doesn't suggest an indifference to the misery.

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Q2) The passage suggests that Anna's factory manager and the villa bailiff are
a) not concerned with impressing Anna
b) inconsistent in their dealings with their employees
c) more sensitive to their employees than Anna
d) very business-like in carrying out their jobs

The answer is C. I put it as D but was confused. How is it C when in the text it's said that the people are driven away like dogs. Doesn't look too sensitive in the owner's perspective, yet it's C?

I agree with you - I think these answers are really dubious. This is why I hate comprehension - There is no right answer, but that said, the answer they've picked is really tough to argue in my opinion, for a few of them.

Perhaps a few of your provided answers are wrong? :)

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« Reply #10 on: August 12, 2017, 03:11:18 pm »
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So I think this (like lots of comprehension) is very subjective, but the fact that the natural features are described as being around the Eagle, this could imply that the Eagle itself is unnatural? They are very distinctly described - But I definitely see your point also.

I think your interpretation is again, valid. However, the answer is likely referring to the fact that the eagle in Poem 1 is mostly standing still and observing its surroundings. The eagles in Poem 2 are more active. Thus, Eagle 1 is more tame.

I agree, I don't agree with the answer of B.

I also agree with your answer here, the second paragraph is definitely not personal impressions.

I think B is more appropriate, the writer spends most of the first paragraph discussing the bullocks. See the phrase, I never saw a tilted dray such as those employed here and of course the bullocks sprint along like a rodeo, that's the bit I'm reading to answer with B.

Slightly deceptive, I think D is more appropriate. She definitely does nothing, so it is either A or D. I disagree with A, the language doesn't suggest an indifference to the misery.

I agree with you - I think these answers are really dubious. This is why I hate comprehension - There is no right answer, but that said, the answer they've picked is really tough to argue in my opinion, for a few of them.

Perhaps a few of your provided answers are wrong? :)
Oh well, thanks for your help. Will the HSC have a comprehension section in it (I hope not)?

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« Reply #11 on: August 12, 2017, 04:45:44 pm »
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Oh well, thanks for your help. Will the HSC have a comprehension section in it (I hope not)?

Section one of Paper One at the moment is unseen texts - reading and responding! But, you're in year ten? So I think this will change for you!
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« Reply #12 on: August 12, 2017, 08:55:01 pm »
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Section one of Paper One at the moment is unseen texts - reading and responding! But, you're in year ten? So I think this will change for you!
Oh, will the new syllabus scrap the comprehension section?