Hey Susie,
I was wondering if you knew what the best way to reference textual integrity in my essay on speeches for critical study of texts?
Additionally, what's the best way to structure and answer comprehension questions for Paper 1: Discovery?
For Modern History,
is it better if I include quotes from historians in my essays? Moreover, what's the best way to structure the two short answer questions on WW1?
Thanks so much!!!
Jade
Hey Jade! Unfortunately I didn't study speeches in English, so I'm unsure how to answer the first question

I recommend posting this question
here though! There are definitely some people on there that'll be able to help you out

In terms of comprehension for paper 1, I structured my response according to the different techniques used (so roughly 1 technique per mark!).
In terms of quotes - it is "better", but at least in the HSC - not essential. Some schools have different opinions on this in terms of trials, so make sure you know what your schools view is on this, however in the HSC you don't actually need any quotes to get a good mark. The top students will often use quotes, as they are a fantastic form of detail, but if you are in the HSC exam and you forget a quote - don't sweat it

You shouldn't have even lost a mark.
The best way to structure the two short answers is for WW1 to use the syllabus! When it comes to WW1, pretty much all the questions are just syllabus dot points reworded (lazy lazy NESA

) - which is great because you can use this as a framework for your response. Also make sure that you are consistently integrating the sources, but not the extent whereby it becomes like english - It doesn't matter what the vector lines are doing, or the symbolism of the colour red in the curtains haha. Like if Source A is a photo of a bunch of soldiers around a machine gun, use that as a way to propel yourself into a discussion upon the role of artillery

It's important to remember not to go overboard with these questions as well - the lines (+ maybe a bit extra if you're keen) are more than enough

Hope this helps!
Susie