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ilovemycat

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please critique my english essay!!! i need a 20/20!!
« on: August 28, 2017, 07:40:43 pm »
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hey all! my essay is on robert brownings poetry and its insight into human nature. as i just joined atar notes, i havent really been able to reach that 25 post requirement for an essay marking . so if anyone could give it a glance and point out any errors or improve it in any way shape or form - i would really appreciate that ! the link is (i hope this works :-\)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PKkC3z7-slhaWpBE6xXaeOzz7IeXuoJCAwfMKXCE7rw/edit

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Re: please critique my english essay!!! i need a 20/20!!
« Reply #1 on: August 28, 2017, 10:15:23 pm »
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hey all! my essay is on robert brownings poetry and its insight into human nature. as i just joined atar notes, i havent really been able to reach that 25 post requirement for an essay marking . so if anyone could give it a glance and point out any errors or improve it in any way shape or form - i would really appreciate that ! the link is (i hope this works :-\)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PKkC3z7-slhaWpBE6xXaeOzz7IeXuoJCAwfMKXCE7rw/edit
I'm not someone who can mark this essay, but just wanted to let you know that to access the link, permission is required. I can't access it (and I assume others won't be able to) without permission from the person who made the Google Docs. :)

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Re: please critique my english essay!!! i need a 20/20!!
« Reply #2 on: September 02, 2017, 07:19:16 pm »
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I think it's just 15 posts now that trials are over

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Re: please critique my english essay!!! i need a 20/20!!
« Reply #3 on: September 02, 2017, 07:40:06 pm »
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Thanks so much for that - I will have to check my google doc settings to make sure its available foreveryone to see

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Re: please critique my english essay!!! i need a 20/20!!
« Reply #4 on: September 02, 2017, 07:50:10 pm »
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I think it's just 15 posts now that trials are over
Thanks so much for that - I will have to check my google doc settings to make sure its available for everyone to see
cheers

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The essay marking requirement has been permanently changed after Trials to 25 posts :)
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