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BiG DaN

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Re: Who else is nervous?
« Reply #45 on: November 03, 2009, 03:37:27 pm »
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hmmph something related to PC. examples?

stolen generation?
change of name positions in organisations . eg chairman is now chair person.
change of immigration deparment.

asylum seekers instead of refugees or illegal immigrants?
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Re: Who else is nervous?
« Reply #46 on: November 03, 2009, 03:38:55 pm »
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Language used to obscure the truth?
Any examples other than political stuff, i don't see how i can go on about this stuff for 3 paragraphs

doublespeak, euphemisms, jargon, passive voice come to mind
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Re: Who else is nervous?
« Reply #47 on: November 03, 2009, 03:40:02 pm »
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why dont someone up with a essay topic and a stimulus material and we write one essay on it each and post it up :D . on PC
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Re: Who else is nervous?
« Reply #48 on: November 03, 2009, 03:40:10 pm »
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can u give me some examples outside of politics for those mentioned?

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Re: Who else is nervous?
« Reply #49 on: November 03, 2009, 03:41:14 pm »
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why dont someone up with a essay topic and a stimulus material and we write one essay on it each and post it up :D . on PC

lol i would but today is my first day studying and i gotta do vcaa06-08 still haha
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Re: Who else is nervous?
« Reply #50 on: November 03, 2009, 03:42:52 pm »
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can u give me some examples outside of politics for those mentioned?

euphemisms used for terrorist attacks such as the most recent one today?
Frankfurt airport terror plan  'massive' is a euphemism for Frankfurt Terrorist Attack Plot would have been deadly?

this article is the most recent as it gets LOL . today ^^
http://www.heraldsun.com.au/news/world/german-attack-plan-massive/story-e6frf7m6-1111114349493
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« Reply #51 on: November 03, 2009, 03:45:47 pm »
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can u give me some examples outside of politics for those mentioned?

euphemisms used for terrorist attacks such as the most recent one today?
Frankfurt airport terror plan  'massive' is a euphemism for Frankfurt Terrorist Attack Plan would have been deadly?

this article is the most recent as it gets LOL . today ^^
http://www.heraldsun.com.au/news/world/german-attack-plan-massive/story-e6frf7m6-1111114349493

isnt that hyperbole to create emphasis on just how much destruction would be caused by 550kg TNT?
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Re: Who else is nervous?
« Reply #52 on: November 03, 2009, 03:51:46 pm »
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I wouldn't really say that's euphemistic i mean it makes u feel like it was more disastrous as Big Dan states

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« Reply #53 on: November 03, 2009, 03:53:43 pm »
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Language has the potential to offend if used incorrectly in the wrong context or with the wrong audience. Discuss

Stimulus Material 1- The Prime Minister was "desperately" trying to connect with the Australian people by using phrases such as "fair shake of the sauce bottle", the Liberal MP said. [Herald Sun 9/6/09]

Stimulus Material 2-I was entralled,I suppose nearly describes my feeling as I watched, why when the law require the use of plain English are we burdened with this evasive use of the language??
Why don't organisations such as the A B C do their bit and revert to plain English,instead of this politically correct nonsense that seems to be slavelisy followed, I apoligise for the ramble. [7.30 Report - John Spiers]

Stimulus Material 3 -"Anybody else around here?... Ah, our little Paki friend, Ahmed." - Prince Harry [Herald Sun 21.08.09]
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« Reply #54 on: November 03, 2009, 03:55:13 pm »
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oh okay lol. i'll look for some more that might be useful for tmorrow :D
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Re: Who else is nervous?
« Reply #55 on: November 03, 2009, 03:57:57 pm »
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PC Language:

“Political language … is designed to make lies sound truthful and murder respectable, and to give an appearance of solidity to pure wind.” – George Orwell, Politics and the English Language (1946)

What is the role of PC Language in the 21st Century? Does Orwell’s perception of PC language still hold true today? Discuss with reference to Australian society.

Introduction:
-   Reword the topic: PC language is a disgrace to the English language, it “makes us stupid”.
-   It makes us gullible and we believe anything we’re told
-   Orwell thinks it makes us accept horrific things as normal and acceptable
-   In the 21st Century, though, PC language does have a time and a place – but only if carefully implemented

Body:
-   For each, when are they appropriate? When is it overkill? Examples of ‘appropriate’ use vs. ‘gone too far’ – all examples should be Australian-specific if possible
o   Paragraph 1: Gender terms
                Appropriate: Chairperson
                Too far: “hir” for “his/her” (gender-neutral pronouns considered ‘ridiculous’), history / herstory
o   Paragraph 2: Age terms
                Appropriate: ‘elderly’ instead of ‘old’
                Too far: … are there any?
o   Paragraph 3: Race terms
                Appropriate: ‘Indigenous Australian’ instead of ‘Blackfella’ or ‘Abo’
                Too far: The plant ‘black boy’ being renamed ‘grass tree’?
o   Other paragraphs if necessary:
                Mental Proficiency
•   Too far? Idiots are defined as those “incapable of gaining reason” and lunatics as people only “capable of periods of lucidity”
                Perceptions of beauty (height, weight, body shape, etc)
                Stature? The little people race this year that got everyone upset (dwarves)
                Religion? “Fundamentalist” or “extremist” instead of “sociopath” etc
-   Also:
o   Comedic use:
                Parody: PC version of Little Red Riding Hood, Baa Baa ‘Rainbow’ Sheep, etc.
                Not-so-Parody: BBC states no more “offensive humour” -> would Fawlty Towers or Allo Allo be made in the current day/age? Can we really only now make fun of middle aged white men lest we offend?
                Does comedic use indicate the views of society on PC language? Can we hypothesize that PC language is by and large outdated and rejected in our modern world?
-   Contrasting views: when is PC language a positive influence? When is it necessary? How does it create a ‘polite’ society? What level of social distance necessitates PC language?

Conclusion:
-   Restatement of argument – PC language has deteriorated, but it is still necessary
-   Support with comments regarding social distance, politeness, formal situations, etc
-   Orwell may be right, but with proper use PC language has its place

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Intro:
Politically correct (PC) language is a 20th Century construct that arose out of a need to minimize the impact and effect of potentially offensive or discriminatory language. As with the intent behind the use of euphemism, PC language was initially utilised to ‘soften’ taboo or culturally offensive language in order to make it as non-offensive to the widest variety of audiences possible. The Sapir-Whorf hypothesis of how language affects the way people understand the world and behave within it contributed to the initial positive attitudes toward PC language, in that it was believed that if we refined what was ‘offensive’ to others, we would by default refine ourselves; thus creating a society with members of a higher prestige. By the late 20th Century and early 21st Century, however, PC language was viewed almost exclusively in a pejorative sense. Making ‘lies sound truthful and murder respectable’, PC language has increasingly been viewed as giving ‘an appearance of solidity to pure wind’; making the ridiculous or the extreme seem acceptable and normal. Orwell’s mid-20th Century denouement of PC language has never been more apt in Australia today; rather than being a positive contributor to communication, PC language is decried as a ‘watering down’ of the English language, cementing the deterioration of the quality of meaning contained within the semantics of the English lexis.

Conclusion:
While PC language has deteriorated to become almost a phenomenon of ridicule, it is without a doubt still a necessary part of 21st Century communicative practice. Despite Orwell’s perception that PC language, as far back in the 20th Century as 1946, fostered a degradation of meaning and thus also of society, social distance still requires a level of politeness that extends beyond euphemistic terms; the ‘softening’ of racism, ageism and sexism via lexis choice is still critical in formal situations. PC language, however, should not be used excessively, lest it cement itself in the realm of parody and satire. Through more appropriate selection of setting when using PC language, the stigma associated with it should lessen. Eventually, this should result in a decline of its pejorative sense, thus elevating its status in Australian society and cementing its role as a communicative device employed to reduce discriminatory and offensive use of language.

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Re: Who else is nervous?
« Reply #56 on: November 03, 2009, 04:04:43 pm »
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is it ok to use stimulus material from practice essays in the real thing?

any1 gonna answer this? lol
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Re: Who else is nervous?
« Reply #57 on: November 03, 2009, 04:05:30 pm »
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what a beast. nice examples
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« Reply #58 on: November 03, 2009, 04:06:06 pm »
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is it ok to use stimulus material from practice essays in the real thing?

any1 gonna answer this? lol

if they're real examples. like legit lol. look up the stimulus material to see if they exist.
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« Reply #59 on: November 03, 2009, 04:15:03 pm »
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for your paragraph 2.

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o   Paragraph 2: Age terms
                Appropriate: ‘elderly’ instead of ‘old’
                Too far: … are there any?

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