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Re: Englang Exam Discussion!
« Reply #30 on: November 03, 2010, 06:42:38 pm »
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What did you guys write for features to show that Part 2 was formal? I think I wrote use of jargon and passive voice but dunno the last one

modals... and compound sentences...
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Re: Englang Exam Discussion!
« Reply #31 on: November 03, 2010, 06:44:01 pm »
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What did you guys write for features to show that Part 2 was formal? I think I wrote use of jargon and passive voice but dunno the last one

modals... and compound sentences...

yeah used compound sentences often with multiple conjunctions, it was standard terms often jargon-like with "domestic ports", and the other had informal language with contractions..
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Re: Englang Exam Discussion!
« Reply #32 on: November 03, 2010, 06:44:22 pm »
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What did you guys write for features to show that Part 2 was formal? I think I wrote use of jargon and passive voice but dunno the last one

jargon, declarative to inform terms and conditions and capitalised pronouns.

wanted to mention passive but couldn't discuss it. LOL

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Re: Englang Exam Discussion!
« Reply #33 on: November 03, 2010, 06:46:17 pm »
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What did you guys write for features to show that Part 2 was formal? I think I wrote use of jargon and passive voice but dunno the last one

jargon, declarative to inform terms and conditions and capitalised pronouns.

wanted to mention passive but couldn't discuss it. LOL


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Re: Englang Exam Discussion!
« Reply #34 on: November 03, 2010, 06:47:10 pm »
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I said standard spelling and grammar such as proper nouns with a capital, compound sentences and lack of pronouns
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Re: Englang Exam Discussion!
« Reply #35 on: November 03, 2010, 06:49:43 pm »
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yeah definitely lack of pronouns, nominalisation, lack of contractions shortening..and the use of jargon..etc etc

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Re: Englang Exam Discussion!
« Reply #36 on: November 03, 2010, 06:51:52 pm »
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What did you guys write for features to show that Part 2 was formal? I think I wrote use of jargon and passive voice but dunno the last one

jargon, declarative to inform terms and conditions and capitalised pronouns.

wanted to mention passive but couldn't discuss it. LOL


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ahhh good idea, didn't mention information flow once in that.
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Re: Englang Exam Discussion!
« Reply #37 on: November 03, 2010, 06:52:11 pm »
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I wrote something like use of passive as they wanted to take an authoritative stance rather then a casual or intimate one..
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Re: Englang Exam Discussion!
« Reply #38 on: November 03, 2010, 06:56:00 pm »
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I wouldn't stress, none of the above seem inherently wrong... marks for all! Wee! :D
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Re: Englang Exam Discussion!
« Reply #39 on: November 03, 2010, 06:57:52 pm »
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Hmm I think I got at least 30% of each question wrong lol (the 5 and 6 mark ones)
and maybe 10/15 for essay,
With Mid A SAC marks
what kind of SS do you think I'll get?
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Re: Englang Exam Discussion!
« Reply #40 on: November 03, 2010, 07:02:17 pm »
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jargon, declarative to inform terms and conditions and capitalised pronouns.

wanted to mention passive but couldn't discuss it. LOL
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Re: Englang Exam Discussion!
« Reply #41 on: November 03, 2010, 07:04:06 pm »
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What did you guys write for features to show that Part 2 was formal? I think I wrote use of jargon and passive voice but dunno the last one

jargon, declarative to inform terms and conditions and capitalised pronouns.

wanted to mention passive but couldn't discuss it. LOL

do you mean capitalised proper nouns?
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Re: Englang Exam Discussion!
« Reply #42 on: November 03, 2010, 07:05:45 pm »
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How about the relationship between A and C? I wrote it was somewhat close, even though they were strangers as there was overlapping which seemed as though they accepted it and completing each other sentences
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Re: Englang Exam Discussion!
« Reply #43 on: November 03, 2010, 07:07:51 pm »
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How about the relationship between A and C? I wrote it was somewhat close, even though they were strangers as there was overlapping which seemed as though they accepted it and completing each other sentences

 I said their relationship was distant however they respected each other
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Re: Englang Exam Discussion!
« Reply #44 on: November 03, 2010, 07:10:19 pm »
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^ yeah i mentioned they had established a close relationship despite being strangers seen through a huge range of features, like those mentioned (overlap, finishing sentences, shared knowledge, etc...)
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