Hiyaaa. So I just got my exam notification for SOR2, and thankfully, we were provided with the questions. I chose Judaism for the essay, and so it's going to be:
“...Therefore I command you, You shall open wide your hand to your brother, to the needy and to the poor, in the land.” Deuteronomy 15:11
With reference to the quotation, analyse how ONE significant practice (death and mourning) gives depth and meaning to the life of the individual AND the Jewish community.
However, I really quite suck at answering the question when it comes to SOR, simply because I'm terrible at structuring, and my teacher isn't helpful at all Would you mind please explaining to me how I would go about answering this? If you could also sort of outline how to do 1 body paragraph, I'd be set (and eternally grateful) , because I just need an example / guide sort of thing.
Thank you!
Hey there! Happy to help out
With the questions that focus on a significant practice, it can be tricky. See, with a significant person, you can divide your paragraphs into the different contributions, right? But here, it's more all over the place. I struggled to structure my Christianity Baptism essays! Sometimes I'd do it focused on the actual chronological events of the ceremony, a paragraph per event, and would talk about how each stage impacted the individual and the community. Sometimes I'd take the approach of symbols or rituals, and specifically talk about a particular prayer for a paragraph, then the symbolism of the white gown for the next, etc. Then I know some people who structure their responses with the ways the practice is significant for the person, then paragraphs on the way the same aspects are significant for both individual and community, and then some paragraphs specifically on the community.
What do you think works best for you? If you took the first approach your paragraph might look like this:
-Sentence about the particular event/ritual in the ceremony you're focusing on. Describing it.
-How is this important to the individual/community? Link to stimulus here perhaps?
-Link to the principal beliefs - how does this specific event/ritual express the principal beliefs for adherents?
-Scriptural reference - link to how the sacred texts and writings guide the individuals or the communities.
-ANALYTICAL statement on the way this holds significance for an individual/community. Perhaps link to stimulus?
Not every aspect of the practice will be specifically significant for an individual, or for a community, and often they are not mutually exclusive!
I know it's muddy water with this type of structure, you've got to assess based on how much you know about each section: is it enough to sustain a paragraph? Who is it more important for? Why does it hold significance?
In every SOR essay, you need to link to the stimulus, use references from sacred texts and writings, and link to the principal beliefs of the religion to ground it all!