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Re: What is the longest body paragraph you can write?
« Reply #15 on: October 25, 2010, 11:21:33 pm »
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What was it?

intro-200
1-275
2-550
3-275
conc-100

So you effectively have one double-length paragraph.

Definitely split it.
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Re: What is the longest body paragraph you can write?
« Reply #16 on: October 25, 2010, 11:23:03 pm »
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people do i study or watch paranormal activity 2? keep i mind i seriously cbf doing anything...but i will post a complete film review including some scare-techniques that will be relative to language analysis.....
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Re: What is the longest body paragraph you can write?
« Reply #17 on: October 25, 2010, 11:25:54 pm »
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550? Thats like... double the length of my essay wdf
225 word essays are pretty bad-ass

You should have done methods man... what a shame
i dont get it

god im a retard

225 + 225 = 450

It should also be noted that 2 + 2 = 5
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Re: What is the longest body paragraph you can write?
« Reply #18 on: October 25, 2010, 11:26:33 pm »
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Ah, I see.

Does Kotza do 1984?
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Re: What is the longest body paragraph you can write?
« Reply #19 on: October 25, 2010, 11:35:25 pm »
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What was it?

intro-200
1-275
2-550
3-275
conc-100

So you effectively have one double-length paragraph.

Definitely split it.

Intro - 234
Body 1 - 546
Body 2 - 281
Body 3 - 283
Conclusion - 105

Wow m@tty you're really accurate =/
2009
~ Methods (Non-CAS) [48 --> 49.4]

2010
~ Spesh [50 --> 51.6]
~ Physics [50 --> 50]
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~ English [46 --> 46.2]
~ UMEP Maths [5.0]

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Re: What is the longest body paragraph you can write?
« Reply #20 on: October 25, 2010, 11:44:36 pm »
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What was it?

intro-200
1-275
2-550
3-275
conc-100

So you effectively have one double-length paragraph.

Definitely split it.

Intro - 234
Body 1 - 546
Body 2 - 281
Body 3 - 283
Conclusion - 105

Wow m@tty you're really accurate =/

Hmm, surprising.  ... why the uneasy face?? No, lol, I didn't hack you...

That is a beast of an essay.
Probably another sure 10...
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Re: What is the longest body paragraph you can write?
« Reply #21 on: October 25, 2010, 11:45:40 pm »
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That is a beast of an essay.
Probably another sure 10...

No way >.< Didn't address the topic implications properly
2009
~ Methods (Non-CAS) [48 --> 49.4]

2010
~ Spesh [50 --> 51.6]
~ Physics [50 --> 50]
~ Chem [43 --> 46.5]
~ English [46 --> 46.2]
~ UMEP Maths [5.0]

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Re: What is the longest body paragraph you can write?
« Reply #22 on: October 25, 2010, 11:58:31 pm »
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550? Thats like... double the length of my essay wdf
225 word essays are pretty bad-ass

You should have done methods man... what a shame
i dont get it

god im a retard

225 + 225 = 450

It should also be noted that 2 + 2 = 5
Wow, maths is supposed to be my strong-point and I didn't even realise. GL with my enter score..

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Re: What is the longest body paragraph you can write?
« Reply #23 on: October 26, 2010, 07:48:34 am »
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god, 275 whatever.

how embarrassing, i literally *facepalmed* myself.

and no, i dont do 1984 m@tty.


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(oh and btw, there is a reason why im expecting a 25 in further lol)
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Re: What is the longest body paragraph you can write?
« Reply #24 on: October 26, 2010, 10:07:44 am »
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god, 275 whatever.

how embarrassing, i literally *facepalmed* myself.

and no, i dont do 1984 m@tty.


*crawls in a ball in the corner of his room*

(oh and btw, there is a reason why im expecting a 25 in further lol)

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Re: What is the longest body paragraph you can write?
« Reply #25 on: October 26, 2010, 10:39:50 am »
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Lol, perhaps in life that statement is correct.

However in VCE ignorance = 60 ATAR.

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Re: What is the longest body paragraph you can write?
« Reply #26 on: October 26, 2010, 01:14:03 pm »
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Lol, perhaps in life that statement is correct.

However in VCE ignorance = 60 ATAR.

LOL, aw u guys crack me up :D
and come on 1984 is great to write about! im hoping to get a 9 for it in the text response :)
and if the Party says that it is not four but five - then how many?" "four"
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