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k31453

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Check My ESl Work Please

« on: May 07, 2012, 09:11:31 am »

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I have done a practise essay so can anybody check my essay its on twelve angry men :-----

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« Reply #1 on: May 09, 2012, 08:56:38 am »

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Here you are... green: my correction or addition

red: delete or change

Some points: introduce your quotes or insert them smoothly.

Write in the present tense.

Don't use contractions.

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k31453

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Re: Check My ESl Work Please

« Reply #2 on: June 01, 2012, 02:47:37 pm »

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Quote from: teacher28 on May 09, 2012, 08:56:38 am

Here you are... green: my correction or addition

red: delete or change

Some points: introduce your quotes or insert them smoothly.

Write in the present tense.

Don't use contractions.

How much you rekon i should get mark for this essay out of 10

My teacher give me 5.5 for that ..

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