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MissJannine

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Writing a History Revolutions Essay. Help?
« on: May 13, 2012, 10:01:33 pm »
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So I got 45/50 for my first SAC on Leaders, Ideas, Movement and Events and considering as history is my favourite subject with my favourite teacher I would really love to keep getting 40s for it.

Problem is I am unsure of how to structure an essay for the second SAC Creating a New Society. I was absent for the actual SAC so I had to fill out a declaration and if she does the same questions it is the same topic for the essay in last years exam for the Russian Revolution.

Does anyone know how to structure a good history essay? If i dont have structure I tend to pad and as I am also a literature student I know that isn't a good idea. My friend gave me her books from last year, and she told me to look at the "8 step framework" but I cannot find it in her notes.

Do i present two schools of thought and historians in the same paragraph if I am doing a chronological essay? If so how would I do it?

Help will be very much appreciated. Thanks!
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Re: Writing a History Revolutions Essay. Help?
« Reply #1 on: June 19, 2012, 01:36:42 pm »
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Okay, don't compare schools of thought and their viewpoints on an event. Absolutely you must not do this. It is a waste of your time and you will not get any extra marks. All you are doing with historians in your essays is using their quotes to support what YOU'RE saying. You don't even need to say if they're a marxist or revionist.

Secondly, structure. Obviously if you're doing chronological you would structure your essay in different phases of the revolution. In France, for example, you would do paragraphs on the ideological phase, radical phase and return to moderation. It's that simple.
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Re: Writing a History Revolutions Essay. Help?
« Reply #2 on: July 02, 2012, 04:09:14 pm »
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In terms of historians' opinions, all you have to do is write what you usually write, and chuck in something like, 'as Schama claimed, "Violence was the motor of the revolution."' As long as it's relevant and you're reinforcing what you're saying through use of quotes, that's fine. You really don't need to go into any detail. You're just wasting time if you spend a few sentences talking about Marxist historians and how they thought all history was a class struggle, or whatever.

As for structure, a chronological essay is one idea, but you would want to be very clear in how you separate the key events into each paragraph, and what the most logical way would be. I didn't do any chronological essays, ever, but the poster above seems to have it sorted for France. :D The method that I used was to separate it by political/economic/social - so all my events were divided between the three and then organised chronologically within the paragraph. Again, you'd have to be careful with this one, and give it some thought, as a lot of events will overlap. For example, something might have both political and social ramifications, but if it gives more weight to a particular argument, then I'd put it in that paragraph.

By the time you've written a couple of practice essays, you'll hopefully have an idea as to how you'll categorise your events, and how best to argue for your contention. From the number of essay questions I've done, it seems that they stay the same each year - you'll be writing about the same sort of thing, so it's just a matter of adapting it slightly so that you answer the question you're being given. I found that after four practice essays or so, that every essay I wrote was very similar.
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Re: Writing a History Revolutions Essay. Help?
« Reply #3 on: July 17, 2012, 08:46:52 pm »
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I just saw these now, but thank you guys anyways.

I got 42/50... according to my teacher for my standard that was really bad, and thought I was still too sick to do it (I just had an asthma attack), I basically just went on VCAA and looked at the questions there, turned out last years exam question about people's tragedy was the essay we had to write on for my sac, and I had some structure from the reports in my summary sheet so that helped.

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