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saheh

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Strong conclusions?
« on: August 14, 2012, 06:43:43 pm »
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Especially for context, how do you give your writing direction, and sum everything up powerfully?
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Re: Strong conclusions?
« Reply #1 on: August 14, 2012, 06:45:58 pm »
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Are you writing a straight expository essay?

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Re: Strong conclusions?
« Reply #2 on: August 14, 2012, 07:06:22 pm »
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not 100% sure at the moment, i did one the other day, although opening with a quote, and i referred back to that quote in the conclusion to try and round it off, however my teacher said a new quote would have been better?

i often do a hybrid with an imaginative/anecdotal opening...and refer back to the opening.

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Re: Strong conclusions?
« Reply #3 on: August 14, 2012, 07:35:11 pm »
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Personally I always fancy a really succinct conclusion. I do this in Politics, Media, Creating & Presenting, text response, language analysis and almost every formal essay I write otherwise. Usually about 4 sentences (occasionally more), just to quickly reaffirm my contention and a bit of loose sentimentality and then tie it up with a final sentence. And I almost always get a comment saying 'short conclusion - good' or something along those lines.
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Re: Strong conclusions?
« Reply #4 on: August 14, 2012, 08:06:10 pm »
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Personally I always fancy a really succinct conclusion. I do this in Politics, Media, Creating & Presenting, text response, language analysis and almost every formal essay I write otherwise. Usually about 4 sentences (occasionally more), just to quickly reaffirm my contention and a bit of loose sentimentality and then tie it up with a final sentence. And I almost always get a comment saying 'short conclusion - good' or something along those lines.
yeah this is what i tend to do, short and sweet... i just feel like it doesn't do an essay justice :p

thanks!
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Re: Strong conclusions?
« Reply #5 on: August 14, 2012, 08:22:47 pm »
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Just sum up your arguments and reassure the reader what your main contention/argument was. Don't add anymore evidence and make sure it is crystal clear.
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Re: Strong conclusions?
« Reply #6 on: August 14, 2012, 08:26:49 pm »
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yeah that makes sense! thanks!

if you guys could help me on the other post i made that would be great coz im stressing :/

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