drafts for my last sac.

[My name aint bob]

So my last English sac has started, and it involves writing 3 pieces, 1 sight unseen and the other 2 on the same prompt, but each in a different style (expository, persuasive, creative). iv done the expository on the prompt "A persons true character is revealed in conflict" and now that i can prepare for the others in advance, im thinking i might post some drafts here and see what sort of reception they get. Im not the best english student and i know it takes forever to go over someones work, but even just a two second comment on one part of a piece would probably be quite helpful to me. im thinking i'll post a first thing tommorow night and then just flood this thread abit, so yeah anyone feel free to comment if they've got a spare minute or something.

Thanks to any helpers in advance (and please don't interprete my overuse of this thread as me trying to push an obligation on you all, ill just keep it quite up to date until the sacs over, keep living your lives and such )

[VivaTequila]

Always happy to help with this sorta thing - post it up in the english marking directory and I'll put up feedback when I'm able

[My name aint bob]

Thanks. i didn't realize there was one so ill put them there rather then here.

Your guide to context was really helpful by the way, good job writing it.

[VivaTequila]

Thanks. i didn't realize there was one so ill put them there rather then here.

Your guide to context was really helpful by the way, good job writing it.

i'm flattered <3 thanks