Year of Wonders (Text Response)

[lnaa19]

I don't enjoy posting public requests but I no longer have an English tutor and am in desperate need of some feedback
So here goes,

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[brenden]

I won't mark your essay because I prefer to give feedback where I know for a fact that I'm assisting the person - your writing is good enough that I personally can't better it, but I just wanted to say - don't feel uncomfortable about asking for stuff on AN. The reason people are on here is to help.

[lnaa19]

Ahahaha don't joke, I'm sure you can. Thank you, I'll keep that in mind.

[sahil26]

Firstly, I think you answered the "resilient" part very well.. "resourceful" needs more working on.

I found that your first and second paragraph were a bit repetitive... Maybe try and condense them down to one.
Also, something i try and incorporate when i write on a similar prompt is Anna's loss of faith...... It being a good thing!
She's able to accept nature and science explore the medicinal world(so do Mem, Anys and Elinor) while the men in the novel stay rigid and unable to learn from the world around them.
Mompellion : drowns in regret and sorrow.
John Gordon : Self-flagellant.
Anna father's : Greedy and get killed.
Anna: Breaks through patriarchy and "now you(she) shines! "

[lnaa19]

Thank you Sahil! Yeah, I couldn't come up with many ideas.
Thanks again for your input, I'll take them into consideration. 

[sahil26]

Thank you Sahil! Yeah, I couldn't come up with many ideas.
Thanks again for your input, I'll take them into consideration. 

No worries