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For Section C, Does no intro and conclusion for ESl cut mark?
« on: October 31, 2012, 08:51:11 pm »
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If i dont write intro and conclusion does it cut my mark?
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Re: For Section C, Does no intro and conclusion for ESl cut mark?
« Reply #1 on: October 31, 2012, 09:37:26 pm »
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would you marry a girl that doesn't have a head or..nothing down there?
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Re: For Section C, Does no intro and conclusion for ESl cut mark?
« Reply #2 on: October 31, 2012, 09:38:40 pm »
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What, legs? :P
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Re: For Section C, Does no intro and conclusion for ESl cut mark?
« Reply #3 on: October 31, 2012, 09:39:24 pm »
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would you marry a girl that doesn't have a head or..nothing down there?

best analogy ever.
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Re: For Section C, Does no intro and conclusion for ESl cut mark?
« Reply #4 on: October 31, 2012, 09:39:38 pm »
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I thought conclusion is not important! :P
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Re: For Section C, Does no intro and conclusion for ESl cut mark?
« Reply #5 on: October 31, 2012, 09:41:15 pm »
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I thought conclusion is not important! :P

you can probably get away with it but don't expect a 8-10/10 essay

the intro is probably the most important for the examiner since it sets their impression for what the rest of the essay might be like, followed by the actual content of course
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Re: For Section C, Does no intro and conclusion for ESl cut mark?
« Reply #6 on: October 31, 2012, 09:41:47 pm »
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I thought conclusion is not important! :P

Who the hell taught you that the conclusion is not important?

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Re: For Section C, Does no intro and conclusion for ESl cut mark?
« Reply #7 on: October 31, 2012, 10:18:26 pm »
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If i dont write intro and conclusion does it cut my mark?

of course NOT
Come on, its ESL! Not English. The ESL examiners already repeated saying that no intro and conclusion need for LA as we are ESL students  ;D ;D ;D But if you wanna write intro and conc, it won't hurt anyway
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Re: For Section C, Does no intro and conclusion for ESl cut mark?
« Reply #8 on: October 31, 2012, 10:22:42 pm »
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'Apparently' you can get 10/10 without intro and conclusion, however a very brief intro doesn't hurt and makes the essay flow better in my opinion. However the intro should take you less that 90 seconds.

Conclusion doesn't matter for ESL - even for mainstream its not the fundamental component of their LA