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Introductions for text responses
« on: April 13, 2013, 04:40:31 pm »
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Now that I've written two text responses, I'm starting to get into the swing of things once again. Although, I keep having trouble writing out the introduction. Once I've thought of my three/four main ideas that I wish to discuss, I just get the uncontrollable urge to 'list' them, instead of weaving them appropriately into a cohesive and expressive introductory paragraph. Any ideas to help address this? :)
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Re: Introductions for text responses
« Reply #1 on: April 13, 2013, 06:16:40 pm »
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I think of my paragraph arguments as coming together to form an extended contention, rather than as a list of things I will discuss.

Basically, I split the prompt into a whole bunch of smaller, open-ended questions - ie, how do i define this word or facet; do i agree with this word or facet; if yes, why and how; if no, why not and how not; if yes, do i go further than it; if no, what is my alternative; if partly yes and partly no, what is my balance?

Then I go through and logically answer each of them.

If you weave those answers together, you actually get an extended, detailed contention that is usually 2-3 sentences and which forms the body of the entire introduction; and, if your paragraphs are logical, they will most times just be stepping through these answers in sections, so you have signposted their topics.
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Re: Introductions for text responses
« Reply #2 on: April 13, 2013, 06:20:20 pm »
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I think of my paragraph arguments as coming together to form an extended contention, rather than as a list of things I will discuss.

Basically, I split the prompt into a whole bunch of smaller, open-ended questions - ie, how do i define this word or facet; do i agree with this word or facet; if yes, why and how; if no, why not and how not; if yes, do i go further than it; if no, what is my alternative; if partly yes and partly no, what is my balance?

Then I go through and logically answer each of them.

If you weave those answers together, you actually get an extended, detailed contention that is usually 2-3 sentences and which forms the body of the entire introduction; and, if your paragraphs are logical, they will most times just be stepping through these answers in sections, so you have signposted their topics.
That's excellent. I'm going to try this.
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Re: Introductions for text responses
« Reply #3 on: April 13, 2013, 09:03:59 pm »
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That's excellent. I'm going to try this.

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You changed your username! Seriously, though - cutting that many sig figs off? May as well call yourself 3 and do an engineering degree ;)
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Re: Introductions for text responses
« Reply #4 on: April 13, 2013, 09:22:22 pm »
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. We're messing with the real pi ;)
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Re: Introductions for text responses
« Reply #5 on: April 13, 2013, 09:33:06 pm »
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I think of my paragraph arguments as coming together to form an extended contention, rather than as a list of things I will discuss.

Basically, I split the prompt into a whole bunch of smaller, open-ended questions - ie, how do i define this word or facet; do i agree with this word or facet; if yes, why and how; if no, why not and how not; if yes, do i go further than it; if no, what is my alternative; if partly yes and partly no, what is my balance?

Then I go through and logically answer each of them.

If you weave those answers together, you actually get an extended, detailed contention that is usually 2-3 sentences and which forms the body of the entire introduction; and, if your paragraphs are logical, they will most times just be stepping through these answers in sections, so you have signposted their topics.

Just brilliant.
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Re: Introductions for text responses
« Reply #6 on: April 15, 2013, 03:07:16 pm »
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Just brilliant.

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