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Adaptations and Transformations
« on: May 17, 2013, 12:16:00 pm »
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Hi

I have an upcoming SAC and I am wondering on how to structure the essay. I am very aware that there is no set structure for the essay but how would one typically write one?

ATARnotes' Lit study guide hasn't arrived yet and I don't think it'll come in time for my SAC so I need your help.

Thanks for any responses. :)
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Re: Adaptations and Transformations
« Reply #1 on: May 19, 2013, 04:31:04 pm »
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A&T was my last sac, so I hope I can help in some way.

I can only speak for myself here, but I structured it as follows:

-Introduction - introduce both texts and comment briefly on any major differences.

-Body - choose 3-4 ideas to focus on then base paragraphs on these. Within each paragraph, I would begin with the analysis of the original text in relation to the issue, then write about how the adaptation has portrayed this same issue. In this part of the paragraph you would analyse the features of the adaptation (for ex, if film: use of music, frame composition, choice of actor...) and how this changes the meaning of the original text.

-Conclusion - sum up points, overall how the meaning has changed

I hope this helps. It isn't a lot but if you have any specific questions, just ask  :)
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Re: Adaptations and Transformations
« Reply #2 on: May 19, 2013, 08:31:22 pm »
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Hi

I have an upcoming SAC and I am wondering on how to structure the essay. I am very aware that there is no set structure for the essay but how would one typically write one?

ATARnotes' Lit study guide hasn't arrived yet and I don't think it'll come in time for my SAC so I need your help.

Thanks for any responses. :)

Hey jeanweasley,

My essay is here if it helps: Re: Literature Essay Compilation Thread

 Basically what you need to know about this SAC is that it's basically teaching you to critically evaluate how texts are interpreted and translated across mediums. There are several interpretations you need to take into account here: The director's, the writer's, and the actors' and, of course, your own.

The structure suggested by the person above is pretty much what I did. I split my paragraphs focusing on key points in the scene I analysed, pointing out the differences and similarities between the original text and its adaptation. Show your understanding of how the director has interpreted the original text into the film and everything that comes with that eg: camera angles, arrangement of the scene, any aspects that have been altered or omitted. This is where metalanguage comes in handy, as well as knowledge of film techniques eg: music, diegetic and non diegetic sound, scene set up ( mise en scene) types of shots ( panning, close up, wide, medium) the way the actor's lines are said. ( by the way, if this is a play-to-film adaptation which you are comparing, look at the stage directions to check if they line up with how the actors are playing their role.) Has the director emphasised or exaggerated aspects of the film? Are other parts more subtle or non existent? Is there a definite message being put across here, as opposed to the relative ambiguity of the text? ( or vice versa?)

Good luck, feel free to ask more questions! :)
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Re: Adaptations and Transformations
« Reply #3 on: May 20, 2013, 12:09:31 pm »
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Thanks for the replies.
I think I might structure my paragraphs as you guys have said.
Also thanks for the advice Lolly, I'll use your questions to frame my response.
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Re: Adaptations and Transformations
« Reply #4 on: June 03, 2013, 05:14:05 pm »
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Just an update, I got 37/40. So stoked. Thanks for all the help guys!
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Re: Adaptations and Transformations
« Reply #5 on: June 03, 2013, 05:19:01 pm »
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Well done! That's brilliant! (h5)

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Re: Adaptations and Transformations
« Reply #6 on: June 03, 2013, 05:36:08 pm »
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Well done! That's brilliant! (h5)

I know, considering that I've only been getting 85% since last year. Man, I'm improving! #thatfeeling (sorry, felt like it. I know this isn't twitter, haha)

What's h5? Is it an emoticon?..
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Re: Adaptations and Transformations
« Reply #7 on: June 03, 2013, 05:37:16 pm »
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Hi five!

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Re: Adaptations and Transformations
« Reply #8 on: June 03, 2013, 05:38:47 pm »
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Hi five!

Oh, lol. Thanks :D
And you're a mod now, that's awesome.
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