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Help urgent
« on: May 27, 2013, 05:02:07 pm »
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 I need to write a practice article and im not sure about the tone so can somebody read the article and figure out the tone becasue its doing in my head thankyou

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« Reply #1 on: May 27, 2013, 05:06:37 pm »
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where's the article lol

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Re: Help urgent
« Reply #3 on: May 27, 2013, 06:09:00 pm »
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Can anybody please help me :)

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« Reply #4 on: May 27, 2013, 07:03:45 pm »
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Um I'm no English genius but I reckon it's a serious and informative tone.
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Re: Help urgent
« Reply #5 on: May 27, 2013, 08:54:59 pm »
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Benevolent tone.

That means that they're simply looking out for the good of others.
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« Reply #6 on: May 28, 2013, 10:26:04 pm »
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I need to write a practice article and im not sure about the tone so can somebody read the article and figure out the tone becasue its doing in my head thankyou

No piece ever only adopts one tone, so avoid classifying the author's tone with one word or treating the entire article as though it conveys only one. Think of the word tone as meaning "feeling towards..." - which means every person or issue relevant to the piece will have a different tone adopted towards it. You can categorise them all as either broadly positive or broadly negative in your head, though, which streamlines things :)

In terms of THIS piece, however, there's an excellent reason you are having trouble finding the tone: it's a *news* piece, and is thus not supposed to convey *any* personal opinion. News reports are supposed to be the facts laid bare, and are not supposed to manipulate the audience's feelings or responses towards any of the stakeholders. There is no contention, because this piece isn't an argument. It's the wrong piece for this task.

Try clicking on the link to the related editorial and doing that one instead. I suspect you'll find it easier!
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