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Using a quote in an expository essay introduction
« on: April 27, 2014, 03:15:31 pm »
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Is this allowed? Also, are you supposed to mention the texts that you'll be drawing your ideas from in the intro?
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Re: Using a quote in an expository essay introduction
« Reply #1 on: April 27, 2014, 06:19:25 pm »
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hey katiesaliba,

quoting is allowed in the introduction, however i suggest you do not position it at the start of the intro or at the end of the intro (i.e. put in the middle). by placing it in the middle, you can explain its relevance to the prompt. the most important thing is not to use a very cliche quotes... though most of them are. find something abstract and profound, and then relate it to the topic - that would be the best.

as for your texts, do not mention them in your introduction for an expository format (not sure about the other formats... but probably the same). students often get confused with text response and context - in context, they are looking at your IDEAS (complexity and relevance to prompt). your texts in context help you 'flesh out' your point. you only introduce them in your paragraphs, not in the introduction.

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Re: Using a quote in an expository essay introduction
« Reply #2 on: April 29, 2014, 12:28:07 pm »
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As far as I'm concerned, you should use whatever you wish in the introduction that will get you the best marks. Basically, if your use of a particular quote will IMPRESS the examiner, then go and use the quote!

It's far to general to say "you always should" or "you always shouldn't". There would be various situations where you could use a quote to great effect, and others where you wouldn't. Common sense goes a long way here.

There is also no golden rule to whether or not you "always should" or "always shouldn't" put the texts in the intro. You should put them in the intro if they will work, be relevant, and not detract too much from the intro.

In my essay which scored full marks on the 2011 exam, my contention for my expository essay was "Authors write books for a reason.". In my essay, I tried to convince / expose the examiner that Authors don't "just write books for fun". I tried to show that there are profound reasons that authors choose to write - they want to show their true colours, give their opinions, educate their audiences, and challenge the way people think. They also pick issues that are relevant to them.

For me, therefore, in the introduction I needed to lay out the groundwork for all these ideas. For me, it was critical to mention the books and their authors, because my whole essay was based on the texts that I included.

For others writing an expository, this might not be the case. For example, if you are writing an expository essay that would benefit from just vaguely mentioning or alluding to a theme, character, or notion in your book, then you shouldn't blatantly put it in the introduction.

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Re: Using a quote in an expository essay introduction
« Reply #3 on: May 10, 2014, 04:10:11 pm »
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My teacher has told me to place a "hook" at the beginning of an expository piece but at the same time I had a specific prompt to follow and I don't know what your studying.

Quotes at the beginning of your introduction is good because the reader knows from the start what you are to discuss, bear in mind the quote must be relevant to your topic.

Good luck.

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Re: Using a quote in an expository essay introduction
« Reply #4 on: May 11, 2014, 12:53:42 am »
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My teacher has told me to place a "hook" at the beginning of an expository piece but at the same time I had a specific prompt to follow and I don't know what your studying.

Quotes at the beginning of your introduction is good because the reader knows from the start what you are to discuss, bear in mind the quote must be relevant to your topic.

Good luck.



Just a friendly point out that the expression is "bare in mind!" :)

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Using a quote in an expository essay introduction
« Reply #5 on: May 11, 2014, 12:55:39 am »
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Just a friendly point out that the expression is "bare in mind!" :)

Oops, sorry. Assisting with English and can't even English myself... It's one of those days.
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Re: Using a quote in an expository essay introduction
« Reply #6 on: May 13, 2014, 09:36:01 am »
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Just a friendly point out that the expression is "bare in mind!" :)

Sorry to correct such an esteemed member, Viva, but she's actually right!

You can bare your soul but according to the Oxford online you definitely BEAR in mind!
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Re: Using a quote in an expository essay introduction
« Reply #7 on: May 13, 2014, 10:07:00 am »
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You learn something new every day. Sorry then!