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e_k1234567

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3/4 Revolutions?
« on: July 03, 2014, 11:35:29 am »
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I'm currently in year 11 and doing history, and I find that my teacher is very lenient in terms of marking our sacs and such. We hardly ever write essays, and that is my biggest weakness. I mean, I love history, it really intrigues me; but I feel as though the exam next year will be very hard for me because I won't be prepared. My vocabulary is very weak and I don't know how to structure history essays, as I've never been taught. (I go to a disadvantaged public school)
What can I do besides from reading history essays and texts? I really want to do well in my exam next year.

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Re: 3/4 Revolutions?
« Reply #1 on: July 04, 2014, 08:23:15 pm »
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Similar situation I've dealt with last year.

A history essay is presented in a similar format as you would write one in English. A basic essay is normally compromised of an introductory paragraph, normally reflecting your overall opinion/view on the topic, followed by a series of body paragraphs. These body paragraphs reflect a unit of composition/ an idea that is relative to the prompt/topic given; that is, it dives into a certain type of aspect of a prompt. Body paragraphs have an introductory sentence, evidence, explanation and link...etc etc.

But I think there's a common misconception when it comes with history - in your exams you will not be writing a long essay throughout the 2 hours. Instead, the exam is split into sections, although there is an essay in it.

There's two area of studies:
- Area of Study 1
- Area of Study 2
Both of these AoS will be two separate revolutions chosen by your school. The most common would be Russian/French Revolution. These two area of studies are set out in similar procedures, but the content is different. Therefore there's quite a bit to remember (although you don't have to remember every single minute, banal and humdrum details and dates.

In the exam, it's split into two sections.
Section A (One of your two Revolution)
Section B (Second of your two Revolutions).
Note: It is wise in the following weeks before the exam you choose which revolutions you wish to do in section a/b first; because its structure is quite different. No new content, just how the exam will ask you the question.

Section A: Contains 2 Ten-Mark questions, as well as one 20 mark analysis. The 2 ten mark questions are focused on the first half of the Revolution. The analysis is focused on the second half of the revolution.
Section B: One 20 mark analysis, followed by one 20 mark essay.  The analysis is focused on the first half of the Revolution. The essay is focused on the second half of the revolution.

So if you did French Revolution in AoS1, but you are more stronger and confident in it, then you can do Section B.

So you see, you only have to do one essay which, if your timing is done right, have about 30 minutes to write one - a basic structure. However, as always, it's how you set it out in terms of content and expression that rewards you the marks.  So calm down, not knowing how to do a history essay will not be the death of you. The structure is simple; only the content and expression of ideas may be the most difficult parts.


However, if you want to begin to do well in history exams next year, I highly suggest that you work on your analysis skills. That is, read primary/secondary sources and determine:
(i) What is the author trying to say. Focus on his ideas/arguments, not how he expresses them. That is the beauty of history; the argument of points.
(ii) What arguments does the author use to make his points? What are the weakness of his argument? How do I know it's weak? What are the strengths of his argument? How do I know it's strong?
(iii) What other historians can I insert to disapprove this historian?
Although that's not the best; it's the gist of it. I can expand on this later if you want.
That mentality will make analysis for you a lot more easier. From my experience, the analysis tends to be the worst.

Other ways to improve your understanding of analysis skills is through the ULP practice your English teaches forces you to do. You'll gain an insight to the ways they use language to express their ideas.


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Re: 3/4 Revolutions?
« Reply #2 on: July 17, 2014, 11:40:54 pm »
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Thank you Cort - I really appreciate your tips :)
And uoiea, if you don't mind, that'd be great  :)

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Re: 3/4 Revolutions?
« Reply #3 on: July 20, 2014, 08:14:23 pm »
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With Revolutions, the most important thing is not necessarily your vocabulary but your interpretation of certain events that took place in juxtaposition with other historians such as Schama and Rude (who are on opposite sides of the spectrum).

In other words, vocabulary really is secondary in comparison to the historical nuances of the course.

I'd recommend not reading the books that teacher/s may offer. E.g. I read 1 French Revolution book which was about 500 pages and The Wild Swans on China which was over 600, and this only gave me contextual evidence rather than study design specific guidance.

Follow the study design, print out the resources on ATAR Notes and acquire study guides if applicable. Often you can borrow these from your school library instead of having to purchase these yourself.

All the best :)

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Re: 3/4 Revolutions?
« Reply #4 on: July 20, 2014, 09:50:56 pm »
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With Revolutions, the most important thing is not necessarily your vocabulary but your interpretation of certain events that took place in juxtaposition with other historians such as Schama and Rude (who are on opposite sides of the spectrum).

In other words, vocabulary really is secondary in comparison to the historical nuances of the course.

I'd recommend not reading the books that teacher/s may offer. E.g. I read 1 French Revolution book which was about 500 pages and The Wild Swans on China which was over 600, and this only gave me contextual evidence rather than study design specific guidance.

Follow the study design, print out the resources on ATAR Notes and acquire study guides if applicable. Often you can borrow these from your school library instead of having to purchase these yourself.

All the best :)

All very true, but I'd argue that reading the right books and using them well can be invaluable. I acquired (cough, torrented) a digital copy of Figes' 'A People's Tragedy' at the start of the year (for Russian rev) and even though it was 900 pages it was well worth it - lots of examples, stats and insights that you wouldn't find anywhere else and are perfect for answering questions with + a wider and deeper understanding of the revolution, which really helps for document analysis and seeing what the source misses out on. Currently slogging away at a PDF of Fenby's History of Modern China, but it's paying off in stats and etc.

Tl;dr the right books can give you the edge
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Re: 3/4 Revolutions?
« Reply #5 on: July 20, 2014, 10:08:23 pm »
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All very true, but I'd argue that reading the right books and using them well can be invaluable. I acquired (cough, torrented) a digital copy of Figes' 'A People's Tragedy' at the start of the year (for Russian rev) and even though it was 900 pages it was well worth it - lots of examples, stats and insights that you wouldn't find anywhere else and are perfect for answering questions with + a wider and deeper understanding of the revolution, which really helps for document analysis and seeing what the source misses out on. Currently slogging away at a PDF of Fenby's History of Modern China, but it's paying off in stats and etc.

Tl;dr the right books can give you the edge

Yep, personally this did not help me and I deeply regret it. But I'd listen to the person above for advice, a lot more knowledgeable ^