Could someone have a look at my language analysis before the exam?

[angrypancake]

I just really want some confirmation as to how I'm doing so far, because I'll keep writing like this until the exam.

Thanks in advance!

[indkel]

Hey,
I had a quick look over your language analysis, you seem to be on the right track i've just written down some small things to fix up.
I didn't do a super thorough correction, but I hope it helps a tiny bit..