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hwilome

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Language Analysis (EAL)
« on: March 03, 2015, 06:09:05 pm »
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Hi guys could you please mark my Language Analysis essay?

I'm a student studying EAL and there isn't much difference between EAL and Mainstream English, the only difference is that in EAL we write 3 paragraphs with no conclusion, and the introduction is kind of combined within the first paragraph:

1. Background info + tone + contention + 1st Body Paragraph
2. 2st Body Paragraph
3. 3rd Body Paragraph


I will be sooooo appreciated if you can annotate/correct my essay and/or give a mark according to the EAL criteria (Sorry for asking this but there's no where else for me to seek help, as my teacher gives me very vague and contradicted comments)


Article Here: "R18+ Rating is kids stuff"



Thanks!
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