Language Analysis (VCAA 2013)

[elysian]

Any feedback will be greatly appreciated.

[izzywantsa97]

- intro needs a bit more content, what are the key arguments, tone, audience?
- Start of first body paragraphs seems a bit abrupt, you need a topic sentence that summarises that paragraph's argument e.g. 'the writer is initially keen to expose the....'
- make sure you're using quotes to analyse language, rather than just paraphrase what the author's contention is
- good visual analysis
- third paragraph is very short, aim for around 800 words

Too lazy to write any more, hope this helps