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strawberries

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can someone please look over my commentary and essay???
« on: November 11, 2015, 01:25:31 pm »
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Hi guys, the exam's tomorrow
I've written a commentary and an essay from the VCAA 2014 exam
would someone be able to look at it, and/or mark it/give me feedback?

thank you so much :D

ps. I know it's pretty bad but that's the best I can do within a given time frame and this is also the first I've written :(

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Re: can someone please look over my commentary and essay???
« Reply #1 on: November 11, 2015, 02:25:25 pm »
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Sorry, but... how is this the first you've written? What have you been DOING in class all year?  :o
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