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Comparative Practice essay - Tracks and Into the Wild

« on: September 05, 2017, 09:39:04 am »

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Hey guys, our upcoming SAC is a comparative essay between Tracks and Into the Wild. I've attached a practice essay and if anyone could have a look at it that'd be great. Specifically, I'm not sure if I'm actually analysing enough or if I'm just retelling the story.
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« Reply #1 on: September 05, 2017, 09:49:46 am »

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Also, in the second sentence, its "as a consequence OF risk"

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Started marking this a looong time, and never gotten around to finishing it. Here's what I had - hope it still helps!

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Quote from: boooom on October 05, 2017, 01:53:02 pm

Started marking this a looong time, and never gotten around to finishing it. Here's what I had - hope it still helps!

thanks for the feedback!

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