Please mark -- Frankenstein Essay

[Rowan1999]

Hey guys, any feedback on this essay would be greatly appreciated!

This was written in approximately 55 minutes by hand - I'm working on timed pieces.

[zhen]

Just skimmed over it and it’s a pretty amazing piece of writing. I feel like there are times when you fall into the trap of storytelling a bit too much and not really commenting on anything other than the plot. But when you do analyse, your analysis is really good. I’d say to just make sure you to avoid retelling certain events and moving on without analysing them. Honestly it’s not that big of a deal in your essay because you only do it a few times. Anyway, great work and good luck on your exam.