Hi Jamon,
Really struggling with my Co-Op application. I can't seem to get the words out. I don't know what I should be talking about to make my application attractive. Could you proofread this answer for me? And also, is it okay that I am talking about an unrelated activity (dance) for "Describe an achievement in the workplace and/or designing, building, programming or creating something. Your example might relate to recent work experience, a part time job or a major non-school based project you have undertaken. You might choose to highlight your creativity; the ability to see alternatives; come up with many varied or original ideas; or willingness to try/learn new things."
Dance is an activity that I have been committed to for the past 6 years so I thought it is the best to talk about in this question. Will the interviewers look on this favourably?
HERE IS MY ANSWER
For the past six years, I have been an active performer both in school based cultural events along with participating in external events. I have delving into my artistic passion for dancing. From a young age, due to have limited access to external dance training, I have been learning dance online through tutorials, and have self-choreographed routines to songs of my own liking. My passion in all forms of dance is shown through teaching myself hip hop and Indian cultural dance online, and performing my routines in front of large audiences. Key examples include my work in my solo cultural dance performance in 2018, where I had, using the influence of traditional artists, single handed devised my own choreography and performed in front of 700 students in my school’s annual Multicultural day talent show. In 2015, I had challenged myself by working with other students in creating a dance routine to appeal to the public. I had choreographed and taught other students participating came up with costume ideas and formations and experimented by fusing multiple dance styles together to cater to individual talents.