Need help with HR short answers :)

[marstac]

Hey!

I just practised a few small short answer questions for human rights and wanted to know if I could get some feedback and a mark for each?

Thanks heaps!

[jamonwindeyer]

Hey! I had a bit of a read and jotted down some comments, hope they are helpful!

[marstac]

Thank you! I will apply these changes and do some more responses tonight!

[marstac]

Is there a guide or rule as to the amount of cases, examples etc to use depending on the amount of marks the question is worth?

Thank you 

[fantasticbeasts3]

Is there a guide or rule as to the amount of cases, examples etc to use depending on the amount of marks the question is worth?

Thank you 

Not really! Chuck in examples whenever you’re making a statement because you need to back it up with evidence. E.g. straight-out saying that Australia protects human rights isn’t enough — you’ll need to give an example as to how human rights are being protected.

Hope this helps!