my english teacher, who is an assessor, told me straight after the exam that they will mark it easier because the topic was terrible.
i based my essay about the one way relationship between the internal/external.
i.e: the physical may remain constant, but psychologically you are constantly changing
and said it couldnt go the other way:
1. due to social factors FAP: jim "knew it wasnt his place to make an opening", ashley"owned the land", but sanctuary allows them to digress beyond social barriers and at each end of the boat "they held a balance" - real life: priest n stockbroker only come on common ground if they are in a jury room (hypothetical)
2. when meaning is challenged. FAP: eric's existential question "Whos gonna look after me" & real life: copernicus' books banned by roman catholic church
3. due to upbringing/cultural influences (first home landscape): FAP: ashley quite liked the ruggedness of the qld landscape - gave a sense of being "unfinished" - childhood in aus. but his grandfather thinks english landscape ought to be imposed on australia "via hedge rows and orderly fields".
4. physical changes - provoke nothing inside as it is part of the human condition to resist change (FLY AWAY PETER= jim and the bi plane "nothing suggested flight" "monstrous cage") - 3/3/38 - first discovery of oil in saudi arabia...how did devout muslims feel about htier nation turning into a hub of productivity?