Does it matter if you made scarce reference to Belonging as you responde to this prompt?- since this section if called Identity and Belonging.
But I don't understand how you can talk about a sense of identity without a sense of acceptance, especially with this prompt.
This prompt was saying it's better to push away society if needs be so that you can be true to your whole self.
It was easy to reject that idea; how else does one confirm a sense of self if not through a sense of acceptance?
We must build on it ourselves and in solitude, but we can't remain distanced from our society entirely for fear that we might have to surrender elements of our character.
That was my contention, anyway.