Please rate my lang analysis!

[Andiio]

I think this is one of my better analysis'; not sure what level it'd correspond to in Year 12 standards though.

Please be as harsh as possible and rate/comment like you would to a normal Year 12 student!
Thanks in advance!

[linahh123]

did you write this in 1 hour?

[Andiio]

did you write this in 1 hour?

I believe it took longer than 1 hour because I did this whilst doing other things and.. procastinating.. >_>

[cypriottiger]

year 11 ey? wow..... ill definately be interested in what mark you achieve if this is what your pumping out already

[Andiio]

year 11 ey? wow..... ill definately be interested in what mark you achieve if this is what your pumping out already

LOL wow thanks :O
Really scared for next year T_T

[cypriottiger]

year 11 ey? wow..... ill definately be interested in what mark you achieve if this is what your pumping out already

LOL wow thanks :O
Really scared for next year T_T

lol no worries your already leagues ahead in your ability to write so english you just have to keep it at this level and 40+ is guarenteed
if i were you, as sucky as it is, get ahead in all your subjects over the xmas break, especially for the sciences with their midyears...wish i did....

[Blakhitman]

No that's really good! Don't be scared.

I should be scared...and I am

[Andiio]

Haha mmm thanks! I still need to improve with my speed though.

Would you recommend trying to finish 1/3 of the course of each of my subjects over the holidays? Kinda scared for physics and chem as well as I haven't been spending much time on them T_T Only wanting to get around 35 for them next year though as they will be in my bottom 2

[Andiio]

Thanks everyone! Would you have any tips for improving my language analysis and for English in general for next year?

[cypriottiger]

Haha mmm thanks! I still need to improve with my speed though.

Would you recommend trying to finish 1/3 of the course of each of my subjects over the holidays? Kinda scared for physics and chem as well as I haven't been spending much time on them T_T Only wanting to get around 35 for them next year though as they will be in my bottom 2

sounds about right, last thing u want to do is learn a concept incorrectly because your working from home. dont disregard the bottom two because u never know what might happen during the year. for example i expected 40 from physics and 25 from methods, but now im looking at about 33 for physics and 35 for methods, so you really never know how things are going to play out.

[98.40_for_sure]

Bro... over the hols you can learn the WHOLE course for all subs. Not even kidding. It's something i deeply regret not doing and learning alongside school until term 3 is bad

[Andiio]

@cypriottiger; Yeah true.. it's just that i'm primarily going to be focussing on the two maths and English as opposed to the two sciences 99+ ATAR next year hopefully!!! (yn)

@99.95; Mmmmm :/ Do you think learning the entire course for all 5 subs is completely necessary though?

[cypriottiger]

Bro... over the hols you can learn the WHOLE course for all subs. Not even kidding. It's something i deeply regret not doing and learning alongside school until term 3 is bad

but some on the last thing u want him to do is fizzle out before school even starts!

[98.40_for_sure]

@cypriottiger; Yeah true.. it's just that i'm primarily going to be focussing on the two maths and English as opposed to the two sciences 99+ ATAR next year hopefully!!! (yn)

@99.95; Mmmmm :/ Do you think learning the entire course for all 5 subs is completely necessary though?

Every bit helps man. If you are willing to give up your holidays, i would bet that you do better than if you "drank up nd partiezz day n nite".

but some on the last thing u want him to do is fizzle out before school even starts!

Moderation. I know some people feel really guilty when they waste 3 hours of "potential study". Time off is good. Just study a little bit each day, goes a long way. Not saying that to succeed requires face in book 24/7, but does require some effort.

[Andiio]

@99.95; Thank you very much. I'm definitely willing to give up my holidays if it'd help me and give me a better chance of obtaining a higher ATAR. Would you recommend just getting the course outline and just finishing all the exercise + questions? (For both maths and science subjects)