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COSI INSIGHT 2010. PLEASE RATE +KARMA
« on: October 27, 2010, 04:04:29 pm »
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Louis Nowra’s Cosi is a semi auto-biographical play based on the events of 1971. Based in a Melbourne mental institution, Cosi juxtapositions the audience to think of what is important and of value in their lives. Nowra opens his play for interpretations and by using the concept of a play within a play he allows readers to explore the main ideas. Cosi is a drama about a freshly graduated university director, Lewis who chooses to gain experience by directing a play with mental patients. Beaten by the enthusisiam of one of his patients, Roy, they are drawn into performing Cosi Fan Tutte, a play written by Mozart. Mozart’s play is used to relate the central themes of Cosi which include love and fidelity, war and politics.

Cosi Fan Tutte is a play about testing the fidelity of women, or as Cherry describes it, “another battle of the sexes.” Cosi Fan Tutte is Italian for “women are like that.” Through the characters in the novel, Nowra demonstrates his idea that women and men “are like that.” When Lewis finds out that Lucy, his girlfriend has been sleeping with his friend Nick, he describes “women’s constancy is like the Arabian Phoenix…everyone swears it exists, but no one has seen it.” While comparing Lucy to the Arabian Phoenix, Lewis still realizes that it is the “necessity” of women’s heart to change and though “some people may call it a sin,” Lewis essential does not think it is as he believes that both men and women can have a change of heart. Whilst Cosi Fan Tutte displays women as being dishonest and unfaithful, it still teaches that it is necessary for women to change their heart as they search for their true love. Similarly, as Cosi Fan Tutte reflects and collaborates with the idea of Cosi, Cosi shows that men can also have a change of heart. As Lewis changes, he finds that he is not in love with Lucy as he had always “mistaken lust for love.” Lewis distances himself from Lucy as he begins to fall in love with Julie, a drug dependant patient. Nowra shows that though women are described as the “Arabian Phoenix,” men are also like that.

Nowra uses the plot of Cosi Fan Tutte to explore his main idea relating to war. In the plot of Mozart’s play, the two male character “pretend to go to war.” Cosi Fan Tutte’s themes, relating love with war, centralizes Cosi’s idea that people “should make love, not war.” While most people forgot about the importance of love, Nowra’s drama was an attempt to remind people that love is important in society. Nick and Lucy, radicalists who are also friends with Lewis believe that at times of war people don’t “give it fuck about love” but Lewis responds “without love the world wouldn’t mean much.” Nowra proves that though war is controversial and tragic, love is just as important. Though love creates conflict, it is often worth fighting for. Nowra’s attempt to remind people that love is important is made apparent when Lewis is convinced into doing a play that is “not so important nowadays” because it is based on love and fidelity. By agreeing to this choice, Lewis was separated from his friends Lucy and Nick. His friends think that “love is icky” and “the last gasp of bougareious romanticism.” The main theme in Mozart’s piece is love and fidelity whilst the main theme in Nowra’s play is that love is important. While Lewis is changed by the mental patient’s to like Cosi Fan Tutte while his friends “cannot believe” that he is doing a play about love when people are starving and dying. Cosi shows that people who accept love as being important are the people who truly care about the world rather then those who do not believe that love is necessary for humankind to thrive.
Cosi is a play which features a play, Cosi Fan Tutte. Nowra uses the opera to explore the issues relating to 1971. Based on his own life, Nowra resurrects the event of 1971 as he attempts to remind people of the controversy of remembering that love is important in any circumstance by incorporating the themes based in Mozart’s Cosi Fan Tutte.
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Re: COSI INSIGHT 2010. PLEASE RATE +KARMA
« Reply #1 on: October 27, 2010, 04:25:35 pm »
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Cosi juxtapositions the audience to think of what is important
Did you mean "positions"? :S
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« Reply #2 on: October 27, 2010, 04:31:16 pm »
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i copied it from the cosi book
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« Reply #3 on: October 27, 2010, 04:34:43 pm »
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Juxtapose, is the wrong word and doesn't fit in your intro.

the last gasp of bougareious romanticism.”  - I don't think this is the right quote, and it really makes all the difference getting it right because it is so powerful.

I felt at times that you were retelling the story. could you please post what the topic was?

Also I think you overdeveloped some ideas and lost coherency in your writting. Try and break it down and keep your writting more concise.

And your repeating your ideas alot and your essay is feeling quite circular.

like this
*While Lewis is changed by the mental patient’s to like Cosi Fan Tutte while his friends “cannot believe” that he is doing a play about love when people are starving and dying. Cosi shows that people who accept love as being important are the people who truly care about the world rather then those who do not believe that love is necessary for humankind to thrive.
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My recommendations is spend at max 5 minutes when you get your topic tomorrow planning your paragraphs and ideas to keep them simple and concise.

Also try and make sure your quotes are relevant to avoid that feeling of 'chuck it in for the hell of it'.

Overall I think this would be about a 5/6 out of 10, just by those, but I'm not an experienced marker either.

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« Reply #4 on: October 27, 2010, 04:36:30 pm »
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well i can understand what ur saying cause i totally lost my motivations to write just about after the intro so the rest was jibberish.
topic:HOw does Nowra use the opera Cosi Fan Tutte to explore the play's main ideas?
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« Reply #5 on: October 27, 2010, 04:41:38 pm »
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I think with this topic, you should extend yourself to include:

Its a play within a play mechnism - to draw parallels between tradition and changing society.

The way that these patients have been pulled away from society, and now appeal to traditional values, because they may not be able to reintergrate (Doug, you miss out on alot of societys morals).

It creates the sense of women equality, and you can draw that to the sexual revolution, and ideas of free love.

Also I think you can talk about infidelity, and how NOWRA USES LUCY for his own purposes.


Their just a few ideas, but I felt quite alot of your piece was on love, and you havn't devoped, if this was a discuss question, you may have not really answered the requirement and that would bring you to a 4.

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« Reply #6 on: October 27, 2010, 05:22:03 pm »
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Theres a few "main ideas" which you could add.

Try this
Intro-
Paragraph on mental illness
Paragraph on love/fidelity
Paragraph on Vietnam war
Paragraph on important of art? Perhaps?
Conclusion
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Re: COSI INSIGHT 2010. PLEASE RATE +KARMA
« Reply #7 on: October 27, 2010, 06:54:36 pm »
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what would u give it out of 10?
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