You had to choose a plant question...
Unless the question is 10+ marks (you don't get these at VCE) I try to avoid sentences that explain statements I've made or getting overly fancy/expository. For 4 marks, you just need 4 different points. Explaining one thing in great details doesn't help. That's about as formulaic as it gets. There's no way of predicting exactly what the examiner wants but they'll accept any reasonably correct answer.
Taking a theoretical SAQ from last year's exam (unit 4 in case you haven't done it yet)
Describe the sequence of events that occur during the process at Y [translation].
Check marks value - 3
Think of the 3 major points along the way - ribosome formation, tRNA matching of codons, loading/joining of amino acids
Connect them with extra information (names etc.) as I go:
At Y, the ribosome is forming around the transcribed mRNA. As it proceeds to "read" the transcript codons it will match complementary tRNA anticodons. Once a tRNA has been loaded into the ribosome, its amino acid will be transferred to the growing (nascent) polypeptide chain. As the ribosome proceeds along the transcript, tRNAs will be released back into the cytosol in order to acquire new amino acids. Eventually the ribosome will encounter a "stop" codon, which will cause termination of translation and release of the completed protein.