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Question:
The work of early scientists has increased our understanding of electron transfer
reactions. Describe the impact of this work on society.
Response:
Galvani's work catalysed Volta's development of the Galvanic Cell, leading to Davy's discovery of electrolysis and creation of stronger batteries, prompting Faraday's quantitative laws relating the charge transfer to the products produced.
This work has resulted in the ability to protect and conserve artefacts, benefiting society.
Electrolysis (electron transfer reactions) cleans and stabilises iron, copper and lead artefacts. They are placed in a dilute, alkaline solution (2% NaOH) which acts an electrolyte between the cathode (artefact) and anode (inert steel). Using iron as an example:
(anode): 4OH- <-> 2H2O + O2 + 4e-
(cathode): Fe(OH)Cl(s) + 2e- -> Fe(s) + OH- + Cl-