mao: shutup that doesn't even EXIST lol. it's impossible! coblin reminded me.
I lost 1 mark. Wrote H+ for fragment instead of H (i'm a retard like that).
Isnt H+ correct as the H's get bombarded with electrons which knock electrons out of the shells of the atoms.
Hmmm
technically, yes, as both fragments would've lost electrons.
, where that electron will go with the flow and run off somewhere else 
That's wrong. Fragmentation does not gain or lose electrons. Fragmentation is a process that occurs because of the ionisation process (and is not an ionisation process itself), because the molecule that bears a positive charge is unstable.
For a fragment of 45 m/e to occur, the CH3CH2O must be positively charged (simply to be detected), while the neutral H atom leaves with an electron. For the purposes of mass spectrometry, we typically assume that there is only an overall positive charge of 1, as ionisation of 2 electrons is rare.